When Discord is left on his own for an entire week in Equestria, he ends up finding about the alternate human world and decides to pay it a visit. There, he meets Sunset Shimmer, the Rainbooms and of course, Sonic and his friends. Discord decides to have some 'fun' with these new faces and introduces a whole new meaning to the word 'Chaos.' After everything they've been through, can Sonic and the others withstand Discord's chaos?
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Wait and See.
I was just thinking for the ending, everyone sings this song telling Discord that he's their friend.
Yes!!! My favourite MLP character makes an appearance. And I gotta say so far you wrote him pretty well. Definitely feels like Discord.
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Thanks, I think you'll have fun with this one.
In other news Discord..... is still awsome!!!
"Discord then turned around to see the statue of Canterlot, a white unicorn standing in its glory, causing him to frown and roll his eyes."
Shouldn't the statue be destroyed? Then again the new shorts show the statue being there so it either got repaired or the animators forgot it got destroyed.
"Oh, that just gives me the most splendid idea. Maybe I can teach him a friendship lesson." Discord suggested as he was dressed up in a teacher costume while a chalkboard with the word 'Friendship' was written on. He then appeared next to Twilight, making her somewhat uncomfortable."
Oh gosh if Discord needs to teach you a friendship lesson you a friendship lesson you know your in trouble.
"I give these to Princess Twilight all the time! How do you think she got to be the Princess of it in the first place? In fact, this can give me a valid reason for being in this world!" Discord realized before he floated to the center.
Well if you count her learning a lesson that you never intended on giving beciase of your messing around with her a friendship lesson than yeah Discord has given out a lot of these.
"This vacation just got a whole lot interesting. Oh, I think I'm going to have some fun here." He said in a mischevious tone as he displayed a series of card depicting Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Manic, Silver and Shadow. He then moved his eyebrows up and down."
Well Discord may be telling the truth about wanting to be their friend, but he's also looking forward to new people to mess with.
"School? Urgh, that sounds like the opposite of a fun filled activity." Discord complained.
It is. Trust me.
"Believe me, I agree with you hundred percent, but there's not much we can do about it." Sonic said with a shrug."
See even Sonic agrees with me.
"What? I just accelerated time on all the clocks. Accordingly, it's the end of the day right now." Discord said with a smile."
Dang it Discord where were you when I was in high school.
"Cool. See you later." He said as he gave her a wink, while Discord didn't seem too pleased to hear this as he slightly frowned. His eyes turned a shade of green while he glared at an unsuspecting Manic."
Uh oh. Considering what Discord almost did to Treehugger Manic needs to watch his back. Also remember Discord she might look like your Fluttershy, but she's still technically a different person.
Man Celestia and Luna are really bad principals falling for that clock trick.
"You have a band? How adorable! You know, in Equestria, ponies are always randomly breaking out into song"
They do that here too. Can't get a peaceful meal in the cafeteria without some girls sing about another girl you don't know about whose actually a pony from another dimension, or some magical sirens stirring up competition for their own evil deeds.
Honestly considering some of the things Discord does to have fun like leading two princesses in the middle of nowhere for no good reason and trapping Spike and Big Mac in a real D&D reality this is honestly harmless. Feel like he had a good idea with the pyrotechnics just need to do them in the right time.
Welp now it's time for Discord to bug one of the Sonic characters. WHO COULD IT BE?!?!?
I imagine Tails would be like Twilight for Discord. Someone who would be a ton of fun to mess with.
Oh." Tails replied, surprised by Discord's interest. "Well, it's meant to represent flight.The thing is, there's a plane I pilot called the Tornado, which was the first thing I ever worked on-"
I guess that's why he's called Tails in this world, but how do two Tails represent flight in this universe?
"Well my friend,I can't let Fluttershy know about what happened. Have to keep my good image,you see? So to stop you from telling the others with this device of yours...well, I put you in it." Discord said as Tails' formed an astonished look."
Not a good idea Discord. If you were so worried you should have just snapped everything back together and wipe his memory or something.
Well Silver was smart enough to not tell Discord about time travel, but Discord still manage to mess with Silver in time by keeping him in a time loop.
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Like a helicopter blades is what I was thinking.
Well of course they couldn't handle his chaos. Discord is at the very least a super sonic level threat.
"In fact, I think I could get cut just from how edgy you are. Ow, the edge!"
Boooooooo!!!!! *throws tomato* come on Discord your better than this!!!
Gotta say Discord might be a liiiiiiittle too jerkish here. Don't get me wrong even when he was reformed he still did some bad stuff, but this might be a little too extreme.
It was definitely interesting to see him interact and his reaction to chaos control. Though Chaos control can easily cause a ton of chaos with stuff like the genesis wave and breaking reality in the end of the sonic and megaman comic.
I wonder if Discord could power up with the Master emerald?
So Chaos is freed by Discord.... prettt fitting. Though the events of Adventure did happen here right? So chaos shouldn't be evil after his fight with Super Sonic. Right?
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Don't worry Chaos isn't evil here, you'll see what he does.
As well, as Spike said: 'Discord's reformed but he's not that reformed.'
Honestly I think out of all the sonic characters (except maybe Cream) I would think Sonic would be the one Discord gets along with the most. I would think Discord would like it that someone would appreciate his chaos.
Yeah like I said last time I'm really thinking Discord is being a bit too much of a jerk.
Though I do like that human Fluttershy isn't an exact copy of pony Fluttershy.
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"As well, as Spike said: 'Discord's reformed but he's not that reformed."
I get that but even for Discord it feels a bit much.
Not sure I like the idea that Discord is powerless againts Feist......but maybe the same thing would happen if Feist was in Discord's realm the same thing would happen to him. Would be nice to see the tables turn for once.
Well Discord you messed up..... like Really messed up.... like SUPER ULTRA messed up, but that doesn't mean it's too late. Though you gotta try hard to make it up to them.
On one hand I actually like that Eggman is a threat in the story, but on the other hand I really like to think Discord learned from Tirek's betrayal. After all he easily saw through the changeling's trick in the season six finale so I think he was a little to easily fooled here.
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You got a point here, but I wanted Eggman to do something
Well never mind what I said about Eggman being a threat. Seriously Eggman you didn't think to put some gadget on him like what you did with the Time eater?
So this is the Chaos fight from Lego Dimensions. Always thought it was cool that they gave Chaos new elemantal powers. Would be cool to see that again in Forces, but I kind of doubt we'll see that.
Well at least Discord made up for what he did and apologized to Chaos, but I still want to see Discord beating a villain for once. The closest we got in the comic was Discord taking his realm back from a power mad Pinkie.
Well I liked this story.
I felt you wrote Discord pretty well. Though I do still feel he was a little too mean spirited and held the idiot ball a few too many times.
The other problem I had besides that is that Eggman was so easily pushed to the side. I felt he's
been learning to take some precautions when dealing with monsters lately like mechanizing the Time Eater and having the conch to control the deadly six in Lost World.
Other than that though I did enjoy a lot of Discord's antics and did like that he made it up for some the stuff he did in the end. I also like how the sonic characters had to interact with his chaos.
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I see what you mean, I really wanted to use the Lego Dimensions fight though, which is why I had this scenarion.
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Fair enough and I do think the Chaos fight was fun. I just felt there could have been a better way to have it.
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I always welcome feedback. What would you have done differently?
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Well if you want to keep Eggman betraying Discord in the story I suggest him having a way to control chaos. That way it doesn't undermine his threat and he gets to be the main bad guy of the story. After all he was able to control Time eater and even perfect chaos in the sonic X comics. You could still have the Chaos fight in a way that compliments Eggman better.
A way to have Discord to contribute more to the battle is having Chaos asorb half or just a bit more than half of his magic. That way Discord can help more in the fight and have him not be completely helpless.
I don't like that Discord was tricked so easily, but I will admit I'm not sure how to really fix that without majorly changing the story. The most I could think is maybe have a situation similiar to the opening to unleashed. Where Discord sees through Eggman's scheme and is about to have some chaotic fun with him. Much like unleashed Eggman will pretend to be afraid and begging to Discord to have mercy on him. Discord gets confident and mocks the doctor not noticing Eggman reaching for a switch and catches Discord. Not perfect and it could still be seen as being to easy to fool Discord, but I do feel it's a little better.
The only other problem I have is Discord being a little too jerkish and I felt he would have liked it that someone appreciates his chaos like Sonic. Like I said before I see Sonic being the sonic character who would get along with Discord the most and I didn't quite get why he was so hostile to Sonic. I get that Discord likes messing with people, but I also think he would like it if someone finds his chaos fun. To him it would finallh be someone who doesn't want to spoil his fun and know how to have some real fun. (Except Fluttershy of course) Though this one O don't really know how to fix. In this story you have to have everybody mad at Discord. The most I can think of is maybe Discord is actually enjoying his time with Sonic but then suggest doing something similiar in a more populated area. There people could be in danger from Discord's chaos and SOnic would be againts that. Then Discord would get upset at him and proceeds to do what've he did in the story.
Sorry for the long paragraphs, but that's what's I'd do to improve the story. This is of course only my opinion.
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That Sonic idea sounds good, and so do the others. Thanks for the feedback.
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Thanks and your welcome!!!
*Me before reading this* I can't wait to find out what happens when Shadow meets Discord!
*Me after* YESSSSSSS!!!!Thank you!
Well this is gonna end Badly, and Awesome at the Same time but, like Sonic says lets do it to it. Any ways i would have read FimFiction but, now with a job, and the Holiday's the truth is i don't, or can't find the time to read awesome stories like this one.
So the Wondercolt statue is rebuilt in this headcannon? Nice! I'm a little salty that the statue is still destroyed after Friendship Games and CHS hasn't replaced it, so I'm glad you got it rebuilt. (Too bad it gets destroyed again in Sonic and EQG Forces but I'm positive it'll get fixed again after the war.)
Did he steal that from Rarity?
So he has the world smallest violin
That was pretty funny
Shadow pretty much said:Screw It, I am not getting involved in this...Too bad It won't be that way
While this was funny...I gotta know...Why was AJ a monkey??
Huh so Tails is just super smart here and doesn't have his...well tails
PFFFT okay that was pretty funny
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...To be fair you practically gave me the chance to use that image man...
Umm the game wasn't tha bad...and you were the star Shadow so no need to be rude
Too soon to call victory Shadow
...Oh crap
Did he play Sonic Adventure 1 or 2...or both????
This was pretty funny too
...OH SHIT!!!
Oh come on Discord first you annoy everyone and when someone finally likes what you do you still mess up with him...also Manic may not be the greatest guy around but that was uncalled for...still gotta say I'm liking this
You reap what you sow Discord
Nice to see Orbot still has his sass
1. Loving Orbot sarcasm 2.You meant to write Cubot right? 3.Cubot is a Brony?how would have thought
Wow I can't believe It's been 20 years since Sonic Adventure came out...time sure flies
Yeah It looks better that way
Nice story It sure showed what an interesting idea is to have Discord in the EG universe