Flash Sentry has decided to make a new change in his life, and have a brand new beginning. He's started college, and he's going to make something of himself.
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Awesome. I love this story, great job
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Thank you very much. It makes me happy to hear that. I'm finally done with the last chapter, and this story is completed.
NOOO. But Sunset how could you. Why didn't you take Flash when you had the chance! NOOO. Now your going to be a loner. Great job Sunset
Anyways I liked this story a lot. I really enjoyed it
8258627 thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I was going to have Sunset take Flash as a bf originally, but it didn't feel natural. I also felt bad for Aria because she had changed and she really opened up to flash. It's not easy to make yourself vulnerable in matters of love, because often it can be complicated. Aria deserved to be happy too, right? :-D
I'm almost done with my next Fanfic, a horror grim dark fic about a yandere. :-D
This was a really good story. A shame i just found it and that it ended so fast. The story had great drama and that was what hooked me to continued. I actually was hoping for Flash not to get with back with Sunset and im glad he didn't. Yet i feel the story needed more.
If you allow some constructive criticism. In the scene were he calls Aria i think instead of hug as you had it it would have been better if it was just to talk. Maybe more interactions of Flash with Sunset and her boyfriend, like he and Aria were haging around and then Sunset, her boyfriend and the girls show up. Another maybe Aria confronting Sunset and actually having some scenes Aria mentions.
But again it was a really good story. The only thing i can say felt pointles was Rarity's chat with Flash.
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Thank you for your kind words and your great critique. This was my first re-entry back into FIM fanfic writing. :) Have you glanced over my other stories? I hope you enjoy more of what I have to offer.
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I have to ask. Does this story has a prequel? i checked your stories and didn't find anything, i ask because of the whole background with Flash and Aria.
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It doesn't. I wanted to show Flash in his college years, and I wanted to demonstrate that things have happened aside from his interactions with the mane 7. :-)