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Splash Surfer 216

Hello or aloha! I’m SplashSurfer216, I’m born with Asperger’s syndrome, and am just a guy with big ambitions and writing happens to be one of them!


It has been 15 years since King Sombra was defeated and the Crystal Empire was saved, but one faithful night, at the Grand Galloping Gala, commemorating Princess Twilight Sparkle's 15th coronation anniversary, the festivities are disrupted by a clan of shadowy, pony-like monsters and a mysterious swirling black hole opens up in the sky, growing in size every minute. Further investigation reveals a horrifying surprise, King Sombra has returned....

With the fate of Equestria once more in their hooves, Twilight and her friends travel from their home to the undiscovered west to seek out a long-lost Equestrian ally to aid them in their quest to save the kingdom from Sombra and his new Umbrum army. Along the way, they'll uncover the mysteries surrounding a new type of magic, and a tragic story of love and corruption.

Inspired by Skybolt and The L-Train's symphonic metal operas, "Fall of an Empire" and "Moonrise".

Cover art by bronyseph.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 26 )

I take it you enjoyed the prologue? :twilightsmile:

Noice. Defo in my favs.

I will read more of this soon

Inspired by Skybolt and The L-Train's symphonic metal operas, "Fall of an Empire" and "Moonrise".

Can I please get links to those songs?

Wow this was a great chapter, I loved it! This cliffhanger has me at the edge of my seat and I can't wait to see what happens next!:pinkiehappy:

Plz write more. I've been waiting for this chapter for forever and it was well worth the wait. :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to find out what happens next.

and Derpy ? what happened to Derpy ?

So the romance tag.......who is the ship?

There's actually two ships in this story. One of them, is made pretty obvious from the first couple of chapters, but the main one is slowly being hinted at, I'm not giving away too many spoilers.

i love this story when comes the next this is so exciting😱

Did you reset this story?

I’m currently retooling it with the help of Everfree Pony, she’s helping me fix some flaws with the previous chapters before I can continue working on it.

Ah, okay. I just hope you don't get rid of the FlashLight stuff.

No matter what anypony says, that will always be one of the crucial parts of the story, so you rest assured, my friend.

Giving it a thumps up purely because of the description

Technically since you have a prologue that isn’t chapter 1 but chapter 2 actually is sorry just created paradox

"Let me in! LET ME IN!"

Yes... but no

Are you going to update soon?

Hmm... Definitely a good teaser, but it'll be the next chapter that really shows if this story's got what it takes. So, I'll be waiting for it.

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