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Crazy Pyromaniac lives in Ponyville, a town so use to everything that even his stupid brain dead antics are mostly over looked.

Edited by TheFanWithoutaFace

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 20 )

i like this will there be more?

8245422
There will be more short little chapters. I don't think this will be long than 10k altogether.

8245444
oh OK look forward to it

i like crazy he reminds me of junkrat but less sane

we have found equestria's version of dr.boom

Comment posted by mrkillwolf666 deleted Jul 16th, 2017

Crazy Pyromaniac lives in ponyville a town so use to everything that even his stupid brain dead antics are mostly over looked.

So, from the description it isnt quite clear whether "Crazy Pyromaniac" is the characters name or just what he is. second, it has grammar errors

Crazy Pyromaniac lives in ponyville, a town so used to everything that ever his stupid brain dead antics are mostly overlooked.

It seems pedantic, but your description is one sentence, if that isn't spelled correctly, it doesn't give me much faith for the story itself

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Merci for pointing out the grammar mistake. Sentence fragments have always been a bit of a problem for me.

What is going on here?

8345184
Just the introduction of the gaurds also needed to get to a thousand words but didn't want to drag chapter 1 on to long, and I wanted to keep the punch line as the ending so I made a second chapter for this.

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