Imagine having the power to be able to manipulate the element like a plaything. Imagine being able to cast any spell with no problems. Imagine being able to lift a mountain toss it away as if it weighed nothing. That is a Dragon's True Power. But one is said to be above all dragons. A being said to only to exist in myth: The Divine Dragon. A dragon said to be able to eradicate armies with one puff of their breath weapon. Tear through a wall of diamonds as if it was was paper. And a roar that can make even the mightiest of creature grovel and quiver in fear at the mere sound of it being heard from a great distance away. But now that creature is no longer a myth but truth. It resides in Equestria blissfully unaware of it's true destiny and the nature of it.
Additional Character tags:
Starlight Glimmer
Sunburst
Blueblood
Shining Armor
Cadence
Trixie
Discord
Thorax
Ember
Edited by: Foxtrotter Klondike
Sunburst and Blueblood are one word.
Great so far!
cant wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you
the grammar certainly needs a lot of work, but as for the story itself, it's a pretty good idea, and I can't wait for more
Decent start, I like the premise. You need a proofreader and an editor. If you have Microsoft Word, I suggest using it. It helps me out loads.
Is this relating to the one-sided Spike x Harem?
I wonder if there are any other fics that address (or accuse) the lack of friendship Discord had.
It will be one sided at first mostly because Spike is unaware of it
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Speaking of which I am looking for both of those things any takers?
It's the first time I'm going to wait so long for a next chapter
Tracking this, let's where it goes.
But you really need the help of an editor.
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Interested in being one for me
loved it but stills needs a proofreader.
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I am looking for one interested
I haven't read this yet, but I had to add a comment when I saw this in the queue as a public service. I'm assuming the author, Omega C, isn't American, because Grand Dragon has a very negative definition in the states. If you need to know, a Grand Dragon is a very high-ranking member of the Ku Klux Klan. This story isn't very old, so maybe you could re-write it to say something like Dragon Lord or something else, just to minimize the risk of offending someone.
Does Spike get to use anvils?
It's about to get GLORIOUS!!!!!
Spike is the Brave and Glorious
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Wait really??? News to me and I am an American...this is the first time I am hearing it....this especially shocking cause I am black....But I need a title of power got any suggestions...Dragon lord won't work either
The Mane 6 fainted without the fainting couches! (laughing)
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Anvils??
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I'm just trying to look out for my fellow authors. No worries.
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You're hired
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Come on! There a classic cartoon cliché.
Fun Fact: Innitially I was gonna put a scene like this in the chapter
(at 1:59 That is)
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These beings have human names, so am I to assume that they ARE humans?
Nice Skyrim reference
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Kind of you'll see soon
“The dragon wakes as my blade becomes thirsty. Laugh in your face when you claim to be worthy. Though I was stripped of wings. Death is the gift I bring. Let mortals hear me sing! Unleash the dragon!”
Ha nice jt machinima reference
I used to play Douro on my ps2 before it broke sadly
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What is that???
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Not Exactly want a hint on what they are?
One word: Longevity
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Spyro that old dragon
Oh I do hope you continue this story it is awesome!
Continue
Continue
Please continue, I love Badass Spike stories
And another one bites the dust
The description for some of the dragons there seem to match that of the Signer Dragons/Duel Dragons from Yugioh 5Ds there.
Cool
Wished this story would have continued.
Would have love to see what happens next for Spike there.
The Roar has been blocked, I repeat the roar has been blocked.
Nice to see more yugioh elements being added in.
How long until we get another chapter?
woohoo!! THIS STORY AINT DEAD
I considered adding this to the tracking list, but after looking at the time since the last chapter, I just thought it was dead. But I would occasionally come back here since it's a good read and personally I'm a fan of Spike being Celestia's son. But now that a new chapter is in...consider this added to my Tracking List!!
Update: The Blue Eyes and Red Eyes feud is vaguely similar to Maretropolis Part 1 of Skylanders X MLP (my story)...well that's a coincidence and it laid out the groundwork for the origin of the Almighty Dragon.
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So he's a blacksmith?
Does Spike go to teenage dragon size?
This is the Almighty Dragon's power! And it's not something that Tirek can take! It's what Spike is using to protect his friends!
Will this fic still continue?