Author of the Homecoming series, occasional contributor to Bodyguard!AU, and food aficionado.
This story is a sequel to White Day
Just a few short months ago Rainbow Dash and Moondancer eased into the waters of dating. It doesn't seem like that to them though.
But as the Summer Sun Celebration creeps closer, it seems as though they may be closer than they think.
Continuity: Equestria 616
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Still a surprisingly cute pairing
I forgot about the other fic, even though I enjoyed it a lot. Looking forward to the rest of this one.
Is the Twi/Luna a previous story or a future one? Or just a sub plot here?
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Subplot this takes place outside of the Homecoming verse. And though I have issues with the TwiLuna ship, it's growing on me for story reasons.
This was cute. I don't think i'd want to be stuck to a cloud for three days though. What if you gotta go potty????
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She isn’t stuck to the cloud. She made a mistake in the casting and instead of adding clouds to the surfaces she could walk on, she swapped ground and clouds...so she can get down, but its not advised
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Lol. Opps.
No, dear Dashie. Being with you is all Moon really cares about. I'm glad you were able to pick up what Moon was putting down.
Wait. What!?!? Not a ship I had considered but certainly has potential. There's feels because Twi lead the elements of harmony to be used to free Luna from the dark magic that was NMM. Luna questions if she has a reverse version of Florence Nightingale syndrome. In canon Twi approaches Luna as a friend in "Luna Eclipsed". I can see how feels could grow from there. Oh, my mind is now going an different tangents.
Ah, so you've done it again and you did not disappoint. I so, so love this ship. Thank you very much for sharing. A like and favorite as always.
I noticed some typos.
Ch. 1
"Hi, Dash," she replied as the cyan Pegasus landed *next to her.
Ch. 2
*Moondancer
*Rainbow
*the
*Rainbow
Ch. 3
and stared at hervhard in the eyes.
*her hard
into her embrace, *turning slightly
Ch. 4
I'm writing about *Rainbow and I, our mistakes and *triumphs. You know, that kind of thing.
Well, this written while they're on the cloud so we can hoof-wave these as typos that happened when Rainbow nibbled on Moon's ear or neck or something.
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Shhh.....
*edits*
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;p
Also,
and
and
in the next chapter ;p
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You!
Hehe, this is a nice sequel!
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When I get some free time there’s another one on my writing list for this pairing, but I have to finish another story for the continuity first.
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Yo, that's totally awesome!
I definitely look forward to it!