Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.
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This story is a sequel to Velvet's Harem
For years Night Light and Twilight Velvet had had separate interests that put a strain on their marriage. He put up with her trysts with Celestia and Luna but when he learns it isn't just them and she leaves a note saying she is moving in with the princesses, he decides the time has come to divorce her and make her pay for the anguish she has caused him.
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**grabs popcorn and waits for the comments**
8261657
They will be interesting for sure.
I think it's presumptuous to assume that everyone will dismiss her
Awwwww was hoping the video came up ..... and wanted to see the fallout for twilight and cadance ....cadance was unwilling at first (gangrape) but I think she was getting keen on the idea at the end and twilight gave in with little to no resistance even thou she had to have known there were incest laws. Wanted to see her friends reactions. Muhaha guess it wasn't AJ they had to worry about..Eyuup.
My only complaint is that everything feels rushed and underdeveloped. Asides from that I think it's good but you might want to show more of the fallout from this on the other characters involved such as Twilight and Cadence unless that's the plan for a sequel.
8261753
Everything involving Twily and Cadi will be in a sequel. I wanted this one to focus primarily around Night Light and his triumph.
If there is a sequel, what's next? Will Shining Armor get revenge for Cadi telling him to take Flurry Heart on a special trip just so she can screw her aunts, her mother-in-law and her sister-in-law?
Well i read the whole story its review time so what did i think of the story well... It was probably the best of the trilogy thats for sure no corby sex scenes straight to the point rather enjoyable and bringing it to a satisfying conclusion i say this might've been planned out though probably not admitting though velvet had a higher bitch level of the other stories but i take that nore of her showing her true colors spending time with the princess since they only saw her in happy mood and didn't live with her. The black mail is interesting i must've missed it in the other though i wasnt a fan of that one my least favorite so i wasn't paying much attention but i feel that shining armor and cadance could talk this out more civil maybe at least have another chance since she was black mailed in this and could be just as much a victim like twi might've been but thats up to you but i will say this is the best tale somewhat unrealistic but hey thays a small complaint for a story about colored pony so realism was tossed out thr window long ago this gets a 7/10 unlike the last two which were 3/10 and 2/10
8262844
Thanks for letting me know how you felt about this one. I'm going to admit, I had Night Light get treated poorly in the first two to make his triumph here all the more satisfying. Regarding Shining Armor and Cadence, what happens with them will happen in a sequel, which I'll eventually get to.
The whole blackmail thing began in the second one, "Velvet's Harem" and carried over into this one. Regarding the ending though, I didn't even plan on putting Velvet's assaults being seen by law enforcement until I actually was typing it in. I've added and altered things in the past but never that quickly. I basically wanted this to be a "Karma's a bitch" for Velvet after everything I had her put Night Light through.
Regarding Twilight, I'm not sure how I'm going to have her react to all this yet. I'll decide that later down the road.
8262860
Take your time but i think this should go back to velvet since she was the cause showing her more trouble for her actions
8262864
Oh trust me, things will swing back around her and let's just say Celestia, Luna and Night Light aren't the only ones angry with her. She has an angry son, an angry daughter-in-law and an emotionally distraught daughter.....all while Flurry Heart is being adorable as hell.
Finally just retrbution. On a side note was Velvet a psycopath or a socialpath?
8264173
I'm not sure which I would label her as but she was narcissistic and a complete control freak. She thought that everything should go HER way and anything short of that was unacceptable. One thing she never thought about in the first one was that when Night Light said he just couldn't get it up like he used to, she never thought about erectile dysfunction.
I'm thinking that next some sort of reconciliation needs to happen between Shining Armor and Cadence. At first I was thinking of having Shining divorce Cadence BUT the only reason she told him to take Flurry and go on a trip is because she was scared of Velvet. Regarding Twilight, I'm not sure exactly how I'm going to handle having her see what her mother did as being wrong and realize that she shouldn't be engaging in incestuous relations with her.
Psyco then
Shining Armor should disown twilight velvet.
I am not trying to demand
8264196
I never thought of that before but I may include that. Twilight on the other hand, has developed a special type of relationship with Velvet and what I plan for her will be much more difficult....perhaps Shining Armor can get her to see the light.
I wish you stopped with the Blueblood hate. You made the princesses worse than most of the villains.
If some ones worst crime is being a snob when the princess respect harmony less then discord. I wonder if Shining will get something to conteract the princesses and to stand on an even footing with his wife.
HERE WE FUCKING GO
So it's Turnabout Revolution.
You don't know how much this sentence scared me. I expected some gross shit.
Reap what you sow, Luna. Your "love" was founded in one of the most heinous ways imaginable.
I actually burst into laughter at that. Oh, StormLuna, you are a card.
I see what you did there, you charmer.
...HOLY SHIT HOW FAR DOES VELVET'S WILD RIDE GO. I'm aware it's not THAT deep but it was funny to imagine that Velvet was basically sexual Illuminati.
I hereby declare you to be, A Pretty Cool Guy.
...Can't win 'em all.
Nonetheless! While there were some stylistic changes I'd suggest and I felt like a number of sentences were too short, I have to say, this gave me a raging justice boner. I don't take back my damning your name in the last one, but I will give you this to make up for it.
This court finds StormLuna not guilty of not being a rad dude!
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Court is adjourned!
8297200
I'm going to tell you something, this one was by far the funnest one to write. Will I do one involving Shining Armor putting Cadence in her place, I might. I have a Pinkamena story coming up, a good and bloody one naturally. I'll just have to think about what exactly needs to happen since the worst that Cadence did was run off Shining Armor and Flurry Heart while Velvet was the ultimate villain in this series....but I'm thinking Velvet will have to face the music for what she did to Cadence too....and in that second story the way I wrote it she pretty much forced Luna and Celestia in joining her when it came to the gang rape of Cadence.
Do I plan on punishing Velvet for what she did to Cadence? Hell yes I do. I won't give out any details though, I don't want to ruin the surprise.
8297408
What about Twilight Sparkle? She was part of this as well.
Shit gon go down boi
Talk about getting hoist by your own petard. Twilight Velvet sowed the seeds of her own downfall. To think all of this could have been avoided if she'd just accepted that Night Light didn't feel like that night.
11017155
I wrote this one as a story of triumph for a stallion who had been abused and shit on by his wife. This one was by far the funnest one to write.
11017241
You pulled it off. Let's hope Night Light's life is only upwards from here.
11017249
It is. His stress levels are down, he doesn't have to house and feed disloyal wife and he can go to as many buckball games as he wants and not have to worry about a bitchy wife.
11017262
Freedom.
11017304
Yeah definitely, freedom.