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Shadowmane PX-41


Just your average british lad. I write things for a living. It’s the strangest living you’ll ever find, second only to my inability to take myself off of the grid.

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The Dazzlings, broken after the Battle of the Bands, have gathered a large deal of hatred and fury in their hearts. Seven mortal teenagers with Equestrian magic stole everything away from them, and one way or another, they would make good on a promise of revenge.

But when their anger attracts the attention of a certain red alien from the Emotional Spectrum, a trio of red power rings soon find their ways onto the Dazzlings' fingers, giving them the perfect chance to use their rage to their full extent...

This is a crossover with the Green Lantern universe. I own no rights to any of the characters in this story. As you well know, Atrocitus, Sinestro, Green Lantern, and their corps belong to DC Comics.

The artwork for this story was created by Jongoli245

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 31 )

Nice so far ^^ Imma track it and see where it goes from here.

I'm just imagining Sonata going on a rampage when there's no more tacos on Taco Tuesday.

The simplest, most effective response is to resurrect Freddy Mercury and have Queen beat them into the ground.

I just realized I used to review your work. You've come a long way dude.

Someone has been playing Injustice 2

Which Green Lantern universe? And why does Atrocitus look like a robot in that picture?

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That depends. I personally believe in the Injustice multiverse theory when it comes to DC stuff.

Speaking of which, Atrocitus isn't machine. It's just Jongoli245's art style. He tried to make him as close to his Injustice 2 model as possible.

8224057 I haven't played anything else and because as you can guess of my avatar im waiting for Red Hood

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He NEEDS to have Arkham Knight as an alternate skin.

I wouldn't mind paying 6,000 Source Crystals for it.

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The one from Injustice 2 is the only one I know of, but all of the other iterations of Atrocitus seem to fit with it good enough.

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Well, Atrocitus is in it. You KNOW that Green Lantern is going to see what's going down with Atrocitus and the Dazzlings.

Maybe Sinestro as well, but not right now. We're getting into the story, and I'm still working on how the new Red Dazzlings are going to be seeing the Rainbooms and taking revenge on them now that they've got their magical Camp Everfree Elements of Harmony...

Looks pretty good so far. Keep up the good work mate.

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What did you think of the other Red Lanterns?

Skallox, Zilius Zox, and Nite-Lik especially. I just went with a character based off of his menacing design, since he appears mostly in action-figure format.

Hmm. I must say i'm very interested in these Red Lanterns...i'm quite curious of how they work in general

Hate & Rage are never in people unless something or someone creates that rage, this story shows the Friendship creates Rage. Tirek, Sombra, Queen Chrysalis & Nightmare Moon all their hate and rage are created by Harmony.

Consider me interested. Especially since this is the Injustice 2 interpretation of Atrocitus.

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That is just balance at work.

It may be sad, but that is just how things work.

With blood and rage of crimson red,
Ripped from a corpse so freshly dead,
Together with our hellish hate,
We'll burn you all—That is your fate!

Welp, all's gone to hell now. Still, wonder if anyone should mention to the Dazzlings the, uh, downsides of being a Red? Like, the whole blood as acid thing, amongst other problems.

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Eh, not sure about them to be honest. They feel like... well, caricatures, really, nothing special. Just there to fill out the ranks. Standard villains really, nothing I haven't seen before. You're going to have to work on that one.

Welp, the Rainbooms are in for a shock. However, the thing is about the Dazzlings, without their powers they're only fighting via pure rage. They don't have tactics, and if they were to be faced with a Ringslinger of any one of the other corps that would be trouble. And they already seem intent on attracting trouble with the way they're going about. Hal, John, and Kyle aren't the only heroes DC has in the wings...

Well, that just happened. Mind you, Atrocitus just brought down a whole world of issues upon himself. You attack one Lantern, you pretty much attack them all. Or you know, assuming it's not the Lanterns that get the message but the Justice League. Last I checked, Lantern powers don't quite count as magic so uh, anyone know how fast Superman can hear that and get here?

"If what those girls were saying about these Rainbooms is true, then we had better make sure they stay as far away from Atrocitus and his kind as possible; even if it means they can never go back home..."

Uh-huh, Kilowog. Not to rain on your whole serious thing of the ominous parade, but uh, there's this little thing called the Justice League. Pretty sure they can toss a few Red Lanterns off-planet. Great whoop Atrocitus, you destroyed a whole town. See, now you've got a target planted on your back.

Sorry Shadow but I thought you just quit since you didn’t upload any new chapters. But I got a question that will make Fluttershy back away in fear. Will Dex-Starr be in it since he’s a Red Lantern.

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He already is, if you remember the earlier chapters.

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Sorry, it’s been 2 and a half since you last uploaded a new chapter

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And I’m sorry too for leaving it to fester like this. I shouldn’t have, especially given the Red Lantern Corps are my favourite corps from a morality point of view.

Atrocitus gives me a Magneto vibe.

It ends up being Sinestro who gets the message.

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