There is one too many Pinkie Pies in Equestria.The stories about one of them trying to escape.
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(I think it's the wrong butt my good sir) (≧▽≦)
Well this was interesting and pretty good story you did I great job (^^) keep it up 【(ChoCho)】
((Sorry I'm on my phone so it will probably end up f*ck up (^^;) ))
I hit the like button but nothing happen...
I hope you write more stories :3
ESTAS LOCO MI DEDO ARRIBA
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Es mejor ser loco y luego aburrido.
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Thank you for pointing out the misspelling, but I think I'm going to keep it in there because it kind of belongs being a first story. I knew I was going to make mistakes somewhere. I plan on this to be just the first of many stories.
Fun story! It was a nice twist on the having an extra Pinkie in the universe. I'd thought it was one of the mirror ponies for a while, and I liked the little extra joke at the end. Good note to end on.
I did notice some formatting errors and a few weird things. Have you taken a look at the FIM Fiction Writing Guide? It might help with a few of those mistakes.
Still, very fun story. I hope you do a sequel!