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As I look at the star fulled sky I see a shooting star and quickly make a wish. I never saw a shooting star before in my life or if it really makes wishes come true but I figured it was worth a try and it was totally worth it and best of all I got my best friend by my side.
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If you want this story to succeed, it needs some fundamental changes, if not a rewrite. I know it sounds harsh but I assure you I only say this with the best of intentions.
Kek
Hey not trying to be rude... but i think you need a proofreader to help you add in some details. I have a proof reader, and my stories are checked for grammar. Also, adding details and using more descriptive words for certain sentences is also a plus.
(Also, what am I doing here. I went from making a video to reading new fics in a matter of seconds, and I also have no clue why I chose this one... Personally, i see the cartoon as funny and straight up interesting at times, but I wouldn't go as far as to say I'm a huge brony. So... yea. Nvm )
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Ok yeah thanks that would be very helpful.
More pls im really enjoying so far!