The newest addition to the game leaves Earth with a blast, literally. Now placed in a whole new world how will Jack fare? With murderous dragons and dogs terrorizing this world and other humans running around the place and doing their best to change the world (for the better or the worse is up to you to decide). Armed with nothing more than a bag and some special powers he will set out for the world to travel, but danger always lurks around the corner and Jack will soon learn that dragons and dogs aren't the only things that he should watch out for.
This fic is set in the Rust and BlackWing universe of Chess Game of the Gods.
I do not own MLP or DK. They belong to their respective owners.
Cover art belongs David and Liz Lillie. Their DeviantArt page can be found here:
http://dreamkeepers.deviantart.com/ <--- Support these wonderful artists.
Lol, I had to snicker at your OC's name, "Jack Daniel". That's a reference to the whiskey, right? Either way, I laughed.
Welcome New blood to our GAME!
I am Troutking our unofficial greeter.
I like your story so far.
Good luck and no you don't get a muffin basket
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!1 and i love cars too, Szereted szólni más nyelveken, mint én!
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That too a bit. Imagine Jack drinking a Jack Daniel.
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Aw, no muffins. You make me sad good sir. But thanks anyway.
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Actually. I, AM Hungarian so you can say that i am in my own turf. And how do cars come in the pic? The death or Jack's parents death?
Another character named Jack? Oh this is just going to get confusing
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Sorry about that. But i had this name in my head for a long time. I hope we can avoid confusion in later. Or troll other pieces with that.
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Yo dawg ('cause i can't say cat like dawg) so i herd ur name is Jack.
So we put you ir a room with Jack's so you can talk to Jack while Jack talks to Jack.....ugh i'm confused.
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899998 what I did not say any thing about cars and a pic but that is ok I though that I should just mention that i love cars 911 GT3 RS!
Keep up the great work...
cool story so far~ faving it!
...psssttt...bytheway....I have an OC named Jack, too.... O.o lolz
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Thanks,
And the jack overload is getting dangerous here. But oh well i will take the shitstorm head-on if there will be one.
Liked it...... I loved it..... Bring on MOAR PLZ.
The red letters spell 'free'
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That's only a coincidence.....or is it?
the adventure begins... (lotr journey music starts playing)
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Welcome, my good laddie buck. I wish you luck.
so now we have a flying carpet, a zebra, a griffin, and a wolf thingy.
ponies is one hell of a drug.
I love this story
make mor please
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And this is where my brain took me. Thanks brain!
I mean really, his thing: this
Do you know how hard this is on a touchscreen?
Well shit. That's where he (Slendy) came from.
Any weapon, eh? How about: minigun, medigun, grenade launcher, bazooka, parts for a tank, blueprints for a tank, missile launcher, sniper rifle, smg, lightsaber, revolvers, gas bombs, flamethrower, portal gun, sonic screwdriver, scythe, katana, dragon scale sword, shotgun, graphing calculator, laptop with internet access, laser rifles, rainnuke cannon.
Oh, and try not to screw over the economy with your mint in a bag. (Inflation)
One last thing
The two reapers stood side by side, looking at the remains of the small town. "Thanks for helping me out, the deaths occurring all over the place are getting a pain to deal with."
"No problem, bro. I do this stuff all the time. Just in case, I did ask this guy to help out a bit."
"You remind me of my son-in-law, Mort."
"Uh, okay, lets just get to work."
The pony shaped reaper summoned his scythe, the human shaped reaper takes his scythe off his back, and the somewhat short dude in a black sweater unsheathes a smoking, black pen, and then they get to work.
Sweet Jesus juggling flaming chainsaws, why have I NOT favorited this story yet?
You, Reaper, have earned yourself a fave and a like. Gonna start readin' tonight!
WARNING!!! WARNING!!! Incoming Grammer Nazi comment!!!
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At this time I have currently read up to "Forboding Nights part 1: Trot", however the only thing that I've seen up until this point is the lack of a large amount of punctuation. Add some commas and you have a great story.
THIS SUCKS!
Now that I have your attention, Are you going to update this story anymore?
And I like the story too...
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WOw, that's sure one way to get my attention and yes, I will update as soon as I can but I have graduation exam very soon, so I have to study for that.
On another note, I hope you will enjoy the rest of my story.
Hmmm, not bad, but maybe the 24 hour limit for weapons is a bit much, maybe tone down to an hour. Especially since you said any weapon, any ranged weapon sounds pretty strong (like the enemy-target gun from the 5th Element). Or is the limit that you can only call ONE weapon out at a time and can't pull another until the time is up, or you put it back in the backpack? Possible size limit? (just want to help
and not come off as a Mary Sue with the bag, but I tend to over think things, so please feel free to ignore)
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Don't worry, I appreciate every helpful criticism I get and you are right about the Mary Sueness it could be used for. As for the size limit, you can't pull out anything that is not small enough to fit through the opening of the bag, in that case it wouldn't even appear there. Also about the amount of weapons that can be gotten from the bag is one, unless it's a pair, i.e.: a pair of gloves, twin weapons, etc.
I hope that was helpful and informative, feel free to PM me about further questions.
Oh hai there chapter!
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Yes indeed, it is a true miracle to see this happen, isn't it?
Well... Shit
Once again this mystery canid enraptures my attention. Good chapter. LOL Pathfinder.
*sigh* I don't know, maybe, maybe not, but dam if that Fire Nation bit wasn't funny.
Hey, its Swift Storm! I think. There are a few typing errors here in there, mainly capitalizing letters that shouldn't.
Ex, (at the start of a sentence) "THey" or "THe"
Also, good on you for not breaking the bottle first. Full bottles do more damage, as shown by Mythbusters.
manehattan huh? well, barrel-of-funs fic wild card is in manehattan right now. you should do a collab. cuz i like both of your stories.
So much potential
even tho l'm liking the story and my brain autocorrects most of the stuff l read l'm finding more then few words missing in some sentences
reminds me a bit of this:
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and then they jack off.
THE END.
wow I didnt realize his name till like half way through the chapter...
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Don't remember what happened in the story anymore.
Jack Daniel? Bwahahahaha
He became a loner? He was never a clan cat.
When he said somewhere a d-dog and griffin sneezed I went.
Ho- •_• -LY -shit- O_O
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What about every single version of the RYNO in hammerspace