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RomeoDKat


A pretty nice person who got into writing fan fiction through the fandom, inspite of school. If you want to commission me for a story, give me a PM and I'll be more than happy to talk to you about it.

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Limestone Pie never thought that she would have a friend outside of her family. Then again, having a sour personality and the look of a very angry pony always made her hard to approach. But when she saves the life of a human named Chris, she ends up making a friend that could last a lifetime.

However, what she doesn’t realize is how possible it is for her strange friendship to develop into something more.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 44 )

So what'll happen if he scratches her head?

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Well, you’d still have your hand...hanging by the skin alone.

I like this. Nice writing and pacing. The latter is something many people aren't very good at, but this is good. Hope to see some more very soon. :)

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That’s nice to hear. Hope I don’t disappoint. :twilightsmile:

This was characterized and paced well, I'd be happy to read more.

Let's dial the tsundere gauge up to 11! :yay:

I like it! Limestone is suitably cranky. We don’t know much about Chris yet, but he seems nice enough and clearly has a high threshold for pain. I hope to see more chapters.

This fanfic is great can't wait for more

I LACK SUFFECENT CONTENT TO FEEL SATED, SO I MUST AGRESSIVLEY ASK FOR MOAR!!!!!

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I know you do, but writing for me this summer has been hard. :ajsleepy::fluttershbad::pinkiecrazy: Don't worry, this story is anything, but dead and I've been planning the next chapter for a while now.

Pretty good story, only fault is that you could use an editor as there were a few odd tense and comma uses. Also I wanna say a time or two yoy usew know instead of now. Im on a phone atm or else I'd point it out better.

This story (so far) is simply... FLAWLESS!!!

The characters are, FANTASTIQUE!

The relationship between our current characters is amazing, I can't wait for him to meet Pinkie and her sisters, that is if you decide to go that way with this story.

I've already read this story five times, which is saying a lot since I usually only read a story ONCE, but once in a blue moon, a story so beautiful, so great comes to my attention, and I can't help but read it repeatedly. Keep it up :raritywink: :pinkiehappy:

Main characters unlikable.

Tone down the snark, Jerk angst, and add some likable qualities or your story is in serious trouble. Think about the great bad guys. Groo, Deadpool, HarleyQuin, Discord. They are all asshats, but they have quality likable traits that make you want to root for them.

No one wants to root for the pissy disgruntled teenager.
The Monk

found these for you. Really like the start, Hope Limestone lightens up as she gets to know Chris.
Limestone's deadpanned stare caused him mood to change [ his ]
Owe, god dammit! [ Ow ]
Owe! He yelled after he moved his leg again [ ow ] found the same thing as I went on, consistent.
Pinkie would never forgive me if she found out I let [ Think you meant [ left ]
splint to see if it was taunt on his leg. [ taut ]

well glad to see this story be updated. So far i'm loving this story though i'm a little sad about the whole week time skip, it seemed to be a little fast pace right there but oh well. Keep up the great work though, can't wait for more chapters.

Dan

Please continue.

Comment posted by Tailgunner deleted Nov 29th, 2017

Ah, love me some Limestone in the morning!

so....? next chapter?

I want more MORE!!!!:flutterrage:

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You'll get more...as soon as my editor edits the next chapter.

A new chapter?
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So Chris got the dreaded "You're stuck here forever" talk from the princesses. That's always pretty rough to deal with. Although I kind of wish Limestone was there with him. I would have loved to have seen what she would have done to Discord for what he said to Chris.

Now for the big question that's going to be bugging me until the next update. Just who is going to walk into that room, see both Chris and Limestone in together in bed and immediately jump to the wrong conclusion? My money is on Twilight. However I think the best reactions to that situation would probably be from either Rainbow Dash or Rarity.

And now I'm curious.

-Ru

I forgot about this story I'm glad it got updated

Dan

Massage. Not Message.

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Oh wow, go me. Thanks for pointing it out. :twilightsheepish:

Angry Pone is best pone. :pinkiehappy:

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Pinkies reaction could be pretty funny too XDD

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True it would be funny for Pinkie to see them first. But unlike Rarity, RD, and possibly Twilight. Her mind wouldn't go straight to the gutter. The only real comments she would make would probably be about how cute they look together.

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A mix of her, RD, and Rarity would be hilarious, though I feel RD would mostly be teasing her for her innocence... unless this is the not so PG fannon pinkie... oof XD

LOVE IT! MAKE MORE

Can’t wait for the next chapter, this story is pretty damn good so far! :3

Aww, that was cute. I would have loved to read more, about their lives together in the farm, the relationship between Chris and the family Pie and stuff like that but it's still cute.

i'm sad its over but it was nice defently earns a favorite from me

I have always been a fan of other character ships and this one is one of the best.

Sweet story. Full of typos, and misspellings, but it's a nice story. You've earned a favorite!

Cute, but way too short. Needs more meat on it's bones. Basically, this was my reaction:
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Thumbs up but no favorite.

While I still wish this story was a little longer. You did such a great job on the epilogue that I don't mind it's all wrapped up now.

Thanks for such a great story and I can't wait to see what happens next in your other story Equestrian Skies.

I awwed at this, out loud. Very well done. :moustache:

Limestone took the pamphlet and skimmed through it. Most of these massages are too froufrou if you ask me. She thought until she actually found one that caught her eye. "Huh, I guess I could go for the extra-strenght-hot-stone-deep-tissue massage."

I knew she would pick that one.

In the words of Mr. Burns: Eeexcellent!.

That was a beautiful fanfic I am glad I found an other good limestone pie fanfic because there not so many I give it a 10 :raritywink:

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