It's nice and sweet, but I can't help thinking that this fic could do with more expansion. As it stands it's more like looking at a collection of snap-shots than a fully formed story.

Not saying you'd have to go full "Fecundity", but a bit more would've been nice.

6 outta 10, sweet, but lacking substance.

Interesting to realize someone you knew of as a markedly accomplished preg/largepone artist is also fairly proficient at slice-of-life. Wind king's pertinent observation notwithstanding, neat use of Klanmei's "mare grows to accommodate her overloaded womb" concept.

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Its such a fantastic and unf concept. Klanmei is an inspired writer.

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Seconded in full there. I'll confess to not being a dedicated macrophile, but it sure isn't a dealbreaker-nor do I mind swole/smol action (well, technically this would be 'swole/slightly less swole') on this scale one bit. Any thoughts regarding how Scoot's personal flight team turn out by the time she's ready to brew another set?

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A side effect of the spell Starlight cast is that her 4 boys are born larger than normal sized, and the doctor guarantees that not only will they be bigger than average at every stage of life, but that they'll be as big as their dad for sure.

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Neat-now I get to visualize an exponentially-spreading (and swollening) Scootalegacy. Faust help us all if any of these Scootacolts take up with the Apple mob clan.

I thought it was pretty good. A few slight grammatical errors here and there, but hey, its a FimFiction story. Keep it up.

This is absurd, in an enjoyable way.

I only wish that I could get like ratios like that.

Naturally you get all 10 points for this story.