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Michael Hudson
Original Works. It was a good run.
Michael Hudson
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This caught my eye because of the mistag. There's an EQG Fluttershy tag now.
8210704 It's not EqG, just humanized.
Blew......away......my expectations.
A surprisingly moving story. Equal parts hot and feels. Gives just enough detail to give you an idea of the background without dragging you into the dark, and the sex is both hot and emotional.
Very well done.
8210768 I am simply impressed with the amount of effort you put into insulting this fic, when I get the feeling you simply are just being a prick.
Nice cover art. Definitely wasn't expecting this, but it was an interesting read.
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So...you're saying you didn't like the story? I haven't read it myself, yet. But I have to admit your comment has piqued my interest.
very nice story, though i will say i was a bit confused, iwas unable to fully enjoy the story part because of the distracting sex, and vice versa, maybe if it were two chapters, one dedicated to sex, the other to story, then it would be an easier read. over all, i enjoyed this!
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It doesn't matter how much effort you put into it. When you write three paragraphs detailing your incredible dislike for a story without even justifying it with actually valid criticism, and literally shame people for liking it, your words speak for themselves.
A turd is a turd and a prick is a prick. You're an asshole, sir. Deal with it.
Hmmm.
Good flow. The story's cadence is good. What I feel is lacking is substance. Both in plot and character development. It reads like a fast epilogue, hinting at a deeper story in the first chapter.
I don't agree with Filly Buster's assessment. Go ahead and down vote, I don't take it to heart.
i took that as a, albeit well worded, rant. Basically they called this drivel. I don't.
Now, this is the first of your stories I've read, Michael. I do plan on reading a few more. I will provide a "thumb's up" since it has a smooth read. Yet, not a favourite, due to I want to see this continued into a multi-chapter story.
8211281 And that is a completely valid criticism. In fact, it was something I'd even thought about; the fact that this is pretty much the happy last chapter to a longer story about depression and such. Unfortunately, this isn't the first time I've done stories like these, as I've got a couple oneshots that read like just barely scratching the surface of a concept, and that's due to a lack of time. I can make something, even if not completely whole, that uses the concept and maybe inspires others to do more with it, but especially now, I just can't focus on it.
I do hope you enjoy my other works though, with all of that said, and this doesn't apply to all of my oneshots. Just some of them.
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I'll give you props for an original idea, but this was... very odd. Not in a good way. The whole thing gave off a very creepy, cultish vibe. I don't really buy that Fluttershy is doing this out of pure selflessness. Not to mention, how old are these "kids", anyway?
Very rushed, too. Lots of missing details. I get that Fluttershy is some kind of counselor, but there's so much that should have been shown here, or at least hinted at. Where did she get this idea? How did she first bring it into practice? How do we really know if these folks are consenting? What about the implications of abuse of power dynamics? Does anyone suspect anything? On and on.
This could have easily been twice to four times as long, and the story would have massively benefited from it.
The prose itself is often needlessly vague. For example, why is Neck receiving oral sex from Fluttershy "dangerous"? It is stated that Neck often talks about her sexuality, but what does this entail? Was she an abuse survivor? Is her self-esteem so low she can't allow someone to please her? And why is she called Neck anyhow? What about Wrist and Fist? There appear to have been some attempts at hints to answer these questions, but they were, again, so vague that they might as well be nonexistent.
I won't downvote, but I won't upvote either. An original idea that lacked execution.
This story wasn't about chess openings. Silly me.
This is actually really interesting. The idea of Fluttershy being a willing prostitute to help others just seems... right for her.
Very well done.
8211281 I agree with some of your criticism but on the other hand, a lot of stories feel like you come out expecting one thing but you can of it, if you going to read come as other stories i suggest keeping to the shorter ones
Huh. You got me curious, any chance this will see a continuation?
Also, may I ask just what inspired you to write this, if it isn't the original story mentioned in the afterword?
Also also... seems like someone's a doxy fan, eh?
8213073 While I do like Doxy, I didn’t realize that that’s where the picture came from. As for where it came from... nowhere really. I had finished Hootershy, had an idea for a more meaningful fic, and decided to write it. This is much more to my original fiction stories though.
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I will finally comment on this whole thread with that one to remind everyone that these are opinions. I will not agree with all of them, but I have not said anything because of that.
I also feel I must say though, as you've now attacked my morality as an author, due to the promise I send to my followers and started beliefs on quality that I PERSONALLY disagree with your comments. In fact, this story was written literally fifteen minutes after a story that I believed to be much closer to your comments, which is why on that one I mentioned big titted monster girls, rather than saying it was anything like my original works in tone or depth like I did here.
But, as I said at the start of this, these are our opinions, and I haven't responded to this because I normally see no need in voicing my own, or putting down another, for we will ask have different interpretations, and thus different opinions.
I rather enjoyed this. I have no real criticism to offer. It's well written and paced for what it was intended to be. I tend to take these sorts of stories at face value and don't try to look for any deeper meaning. I just enjoy it for what it is. Well done.
Sex tends to be good. Mysteries attached to it... I'm not sold on it. Sorry. Adding depressing things... I guess if you're going for that niche hentai vibe. It's very authentic.
Well... This is one way to show Kindness.