The Magic of Sex Appeal?

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Broneigh

Broneigh #1 · Jun 25th, 2017 · · ·

Great Story but a quite few errors...

Brush looked on very surprised by this pegasus guard. A critical side of him wondered how much the armor they wore was actually helpful and how much of it was out of some pervy desire by the Nightmares that their soldiers be basically naked. Made him wonder if they’d even be interested in a stallion. However, his libido chimed in as he eyed up the scantily clad guard and his cock was really throbbing with desire. The vermilion stallion tried to push his cock down a bit trying not to make it so noticeable but it was impossible to hide given that he was after all naked.

That was pasted in there twice, side by side.

That was the major one, with a few spelling and grammatical errors, but It's a very good story, don't get me wrong.
All you need is a good proofreader, and you'll have yourself a a fine story. Have a like!

Base-Delta-Zero

Base-Delta-Zero #2 · Jun 25th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Oh hoh hoh hoh HOH, what did I just stumble across? Dios mío, this ticks me right in the fetish!

Typist Gray

Typist Gray #3 · Jun 25th, 2017 · 1 · 3 ·

I'm sorry, but the grammar was just intolerable.

Dusk Star Shine

Dusk Star Shine #4 · Jun 27th, 2017 · · ·

So did Brush really knock up both Nightmares?

Hornycorn

Hornycorn #5 · Sep 3rd, 2017 · 1 · ·

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If you're talking about like if they're gonna have his babies, we haven't thought that far ahead. You could almost look at this being basically the same as a majority of porn where people bang but we don't see any of the major repercussions like pregnancy and such.

Blow Grenade

Blow Grenade #6 · Mar 16th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Pfff I am can be the same big sex machine to any mare who stand against me about sexy fun. But again Brush Strock made an amazing show to giving lots of sexy & good show

Dusk Star Shine