No to be nit-picky, but...

“It's sort of our bed and butter here in the land of Equestria."

You mean, “bread and butter”?

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whoops XD, okay, I’ll fix that

Ok dude this is WAY to rushed he arrives In equestria and they literally explain to him everything right away? Please man you gotta work on that.

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I’m trying.

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My dude, I feel you. The way this story plays out aggravates me too. But we're just here to jack off. It sets up how we got human dick goin into pony puss along with a bit of feels to put behind the bangin. That's all it needed to do. It didn't exactly do it well, but that's not why we're here now is it? This is basically porn.

does the viewer really care about how invested the husband is in his analytics job and how he's never around and how the wife is just ohso lonely and needs somebody to keep her company and calls up the pool guy who is also a really close family friend and how this might affect their relationship and blah blah blah? No, as long as the clop part of the clopfic is good (it is pretty good, I enjoyed it nice work), the story setting up reason why the sexy bits are happening is secondary.

*Sniff* can someone give Lilac a tissue..?

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*gives you a tissue* here you go

Just give me a minute _wipes eyes_

This story warms my heart up this is really good thanks Israel

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no prob

Wow...right in the feels

Man, the last part really touched me..

You mean 7 humans since Frosty's sister, Emily is with him in Pinkie's story right?

Be that as it may, you helped yourself fall asleep by thinking of something that relaxed your body and mind, like picturing a waterfall in a peaceful rainforest, or the waves of the sea making their way to dry land and receding. It took at least half an hour to work, but you finally felt tired and fell asleep.

That's just going to make you need a bathroom

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Right, I'm going to guess that either he forgot or didn't know that yet