• Member Since 8th May, 2016
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Razor Blade the Unicron


No longer writing here.

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Today is my birthday. Today is Rainbow Dash's birthday. I suppose I'll just go home and celebrate it alone. Even Pinkie Pie doesn't remember that it's my birthday. After all, Rainbow Dash is far more important than me.

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Could there please be a sequel where Pinkie realizes she never gave Octavia her birthday party and gets really sad?

This was good. A little short to really build a connection to Tavi—and Lyra seems to come out of the blue—but good. Nice work.

Well done. It was short, but very sweet. Though I wish you could have included Vinyl too. She would have loved to celebrate with Octavia.

8210225 I was considering adding Vinyl, but decided against it. After all, she can't just skip out on her work to celebrate Octavia's birthday, even if she wanted to.

The contest judging is finished, here's a link if you'd like to take a look. :pinkiehappy:

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