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QueenChrysalisForever


Fan since Gen1, Queen Chrysalis Fave Villain, Fluttershy+Twilight Fave Mane Ponies, love to write, draw, and read. Avatar Drawn by me, ask before using.:)

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A long time ago a prophecy was made by my ancestors, that a time would come when one of our wolf kind would be needed. A dark presence was coming toward our land, our homes. What it wanted most of all was to destroy our peaceful way of life, take our forest village for its own, and bathe the grass and trees in our blood.
But the prophecy states, if a pony can love the wolf for who he is, together their power would be enough to defeat this evil, and vanquish it back to the bowels of Tarturus from whence it came. So comes our story in the present day, when the evil looms near. Will we succeed? Or will we be doomed?

Pre-readers:
Yurick45
Meep the Changeling
MuckyHusky

Editor:
(Up to Chapter 3)
Nightmare Darkness

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 39 )

Alright, you have my attention. I would like to see where this goes. A great start in my opinion.

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Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy. Chapter two will be posted tomorrow, so won't need to wait too long. :twilightsmile:

Color me intrigued. I have always been interested in sentient timbewolf stories, and this one looks exceptionally well written. I eagerly await more.

Ok but we need chapter two!!! :pinkiecrazy: we demand a two!!! Or a sacrifice!!!

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Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Same here, there are so few of them that I have found, and of those, most I have seen were just clop fics.:ajsleepy:

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Hehe don't worry, you know it is coming out soon.:derpytongue2:

Wooooooohooooo:pinkiehappy:

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Hope that is just an excitement for a new chapter. :trixieshiftright:

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Oh of course among other things lol:twilightsmile:

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Now it's chapter 3 lol I'm hooked:derpytongue2:

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Hehe well I would hope so. :pinkiehappy: But yep chapter three tomorrow, then I'll have to play catch-up. Hard part of Being without a computer for almost a week.

Am confused, why does this story still have one like >.<

CLIFFHANGERS! Please don't make this a habit or I swear to Faust I will keep reading every chapter! Wait...

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I'm sorry/ not sorry:derpytongue2:, heh, don't worry, not EVERY chapter will be a cliffhanger. :raritywink:

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

interesting story so far, I didn't realize that the pony was a mare at first and that the timberwolf was a male. Still, I am looking forward to see more.

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There are/will be some deaths, fighting, injuries from being hunted to name most of the bigger ones, brain is too asleep right now to recall the rest.:twilightblush:

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Hmm maybe I should make that a bit more clear when I get back to a computer then... but good, I'm glad you are enjoying it! I plan on having the next chapter out in a few days, so shouldn't be too long of a wait!:twilightsmile:

"So, don't think about the atraction too hard?"
"Yup"
"K"
I don't know if it was just me, but this felt refreshing and jarring at the same time. It's a breakaway from the cliché "but it's wrong" thing, but it also kinda trout slaps you with how sudden it is. I don't know how I feel about this yet. Other than that this chapter was great.

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Hehe thanks! :twilightsmile: I like to give my own twist on the old cliche. And it is kind of something I always wondered in the old tales about such things, wondering why they didn't even question this new attraction to each other. But yeah, wanted to do a little more realistic reaction?
I hope you continue to enjoy! Next chapter should be up tomorrow(Sunday) or Monday, just finishing a few scenes in chapter 4.

Do you have a proofreader? There's all these little typos that take away from your masterpiece. I would be happy to, as would other fans.

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Pre-readers, but not a proofreader. I try to do most of it myself, but being I write it later at night (which is when I have time) I do miss some things. (I have been trying to find a proofreader though. So if you want to, would love to have you on board for that! :pinkiehappy:)

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Sounds like a plan. Sign me up!

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Awesome! Thanks :pinkiehappy: Want me to send you a link to a google doc for chapter one to start, or just have you go at it?

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Send me chapter one to start.

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Okay sounds good. Shall send the version me and some of my pre-readers have been going at.

Interesting plot twist, looking forward to the next one.

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Thanks! :twilightsmile: I do love plot twists, as long as they make sense of course. Hope you enjoy! Might actually have the next part out sooner than I originally planned.

Yay ! Chapter 5 already but your plots keep all my attention.
👍 Like it, so go on ! I will not wait long for chapter 6.

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Aww thanks! I'm glad my plots keep your attention so well. :twilightsmile: It won't be 'too' long for a next chapter, but it likely won't be in 2017.
I'm concentrating on finishing book one of Long Live the Queen for November and December, as it is my goal to finish it before the new year. Then I will take a short break from that world/storyline to write up some more of this story in January. :pinkiehappy:

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I understand well.
Good to hear you gonna take a breath for Winter. Working to hard can cause many sickness. So keep cool.

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Don't I know it! :derpytongue2: but yeah a break will be nice. Will also work on the cover for book two while I'm at it. I have some concept art Done so far, now just to do the actual art!

Tgis story is really cool! Please continue!

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Thanks :pinkiehappy: Don't worry, I plan on doing so, just finishing Long Live the Queen first, then I'll have more time to work on this as well.

Oh hey, another timberwolf writer friend. Hello! Looking forward to reading this.

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Indeed! They are fun to write about. (And I totally need to get back to writing this one heh :twilightsheepish: ) Thanks for the follow and I hope you enjoy when you get to reading it!!

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