Sassy Saddles and Rarity are exploring in the Everfree Forest, and Sassy Saddles leads Rarity to something deadly and makes her relax in it until she disappears.
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You're practically an Evictus clone. This is not something you want to be.
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He probably IS Evictus...
8226443
An excellent point. After all, trolls and sockpuppets go together like biscuits and gravy.
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You know it.
8226440
I'm telling you, I'm not a Evictus clone. I made this on my own.
8226443
Hey didn't you read my name. I'm not Evictus.
8226447
You know, go kiss my butt. okay?
8226463
You could be an alternate account. Simple test is, do you use commas (and ANY punctuation or grammar), can you spell, do you know what a plot is, can you write characters in character?
I read this.
You don't say?
You mix past and present tense in this opening paragraph.
on the branches
they would give...
there wouldn't be...
OMG...you ARE Evictus!
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yes, this is my only account I use.
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I AM NOT! I just have trouble with my writing. Evictus's is an online buddy of mine. That doesn't mean I'm him.
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8226440
Will the both of you knock it off? If making someone feel bad over some mistakes is how you get your kicks, then I feel sorry for you.
what the fuck
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what? What did you think of the story? give me some feedback, brosive.
8226440 Back off of him. We are trying our best
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did you read this story yet?
8228863 Not yet I was going to but I noticed the comment so I had to reply to it
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If Evictus ever did anything praiseworthy, I'd certainly offer some (if I wasn't blocked, of course). Given that Yoshi here was starting to head down the same path, I decided to advise him against it. Merely take a gander at some of the former's 'work' and you'll see for yourself why I hold certain opinions, which I assure you are not arbitrary. The numbers and comments speak for themselves.