• Member Since 28th Dec, 2016
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AJtheRaven


Appledash shipper. Critical of everything. Except Appledash. Because Appledash.

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The Elements of Harmony are borne still, but their original carriers are long gone.
All except one. Twilight Sparkle has lived for a millennium. And she has spent almost all of it alone.
But the memories of her friends still live on - on the distant hill where her friends lie, in Twilight's heart... in her photographs.


Cover art - http://manglefoxfnaf2.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-Sparkle-Sad-527402463

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Comments ( 14 )

Oh. Oh my. I'm the first comment on a JacksAndDashes story? What an honor! :yay:
Anyway. I guess you weren't kidding when you said "bring your tissues". That whole "Remembrance" story is indeed quite old, but you put a nice spin on it. I especially liked the detail given to the gravestones near the end-and I swear, I honest-to-goodness started to tear up when Twilight thought she saw, just for a moment, all her friends as vibrant and young as ever. Or perhaps, she only imagined it.

I also rather enjoyed this little tidbit-

Yeah, she's sorry!" Pinkie drew in a deep breath and began to sing, holding her hooves out to Applejack. "She's sorry, she's sorry, to make up for it she'll take you on an, ummm, safari -"

Oh, Pinkie. It goes like this, see?
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Haha. Oh well.
All in all, beautiful story. May your writing live on. :raritycry:

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Thank you so much! Reading this comment made me so happy. I'm glad you liked it.
You know what, writing that moment almost made me cry too. It was legitimately miserable. Something about watching your favorite characters grow up and die is just the worst thing ever. (I mean, it's the WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!)
Anyway. I hope you enjoyed it. :)

What a beautiful and sad story, you've written it amazingly~

Wow. There is no words to describe what I just read except
Sad and well written

I cried a little bit to be honest. It was a great story with a good spin on things.
Great job I'd say.

you made me cry!:raritycry:

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OH NO! I'm sorry! (And just a teeny tiny bit pleased because that was kind of my intention, but I'm mostly sad.) have a virtual cookie to cheer you up? :) and thanks for the follow!

Truly a masterpiece.

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Thanks!! So glad yuh liked it.

im crying...
like, wow. I mean you've probably gotten this before but wow.

You hurt me in the feels, and it wasn't even a quick punch! It was like slowly burning me with a cold fire...

owch and this is beautiful, thank you

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