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Darkswirl
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]OH MY CELESTIA, This put me in tears.
[img]http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lu0evi0O301r0ojhto1_500.gif[/img
Arent they?
Putting this on my read later. I'd read it now, but I'm not in the mood for a sadfic
A short sadfic? *clicks Read Later*
Oh look, its a comment, woopie fucking do, stop reading this.
I'm talking about the comment I'm making, the storys Fucking great, READ IT AND NOT THIS.
Ohmygod. Dx Gone through half a box of cleenex.
You forgot the quotation marks around a paragraph, which is... confusing.
This made me cry, AND I'M THE GOD-DAMN AUDITOR!
You are the master of sad fic writing.
True story, about Animals nowdays.
Okay, one word, Wut?
Like Yoda.
This story is somewhere similar to a picture on Deviantart. Like....very similar to be honest but I don't know where it is.
Got bored, loved the story, wrote a 3rd person end. Do you like?
Within the dark winding hours of the night, Twilight watched as Spikes eyes fluttered closed. His breathing slowed, and the movement of his chest began to halt.
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There was a spell that could give unicorns wings. The same one, as a matter of fact, that Twilight used on Rarity. Twilight's days where winding down, and there was one last place she wanted to adventure to. One last subject she wanted to learn. Twilight wanted to fly. Her older age made the magic hard to accumulate, but after minutes of concentration, it worked. Outside of the library, and in the bright sun that Luna rose, stood Twilight. With a flap of the wings and calm mind, she took to the skies. First passing over Sugarcube Corner, over Rarity's Boutique, over the trees of Sweet Apple Acres, past the Everfree forest and the old cottage that was placed near it, and lastly over the cloud home Rainbow once lived in.
Twilight wanted one more thing, aside from learning about flying. Aside from taking to the skies Rainbow always loved to be in. Twilight wanted to go out with a bang. She flew higher, getting closer to the top of the sky, closer to the sun. The suns heat began to radiant over the wings, causing them to decompose. With a smile, she felt herself fall, and closed her eyes. It was only time, before she would finally.....
Want to cry? Read this story while listening to Linkin Park - In My Remains "Like an army, falling, one by one by one"
It is complytely understandable that a short ending was in place.
this has to be one of the factor even if the plot was used. I will look forward to see more from you.
This was really good an emotional. I wish I hadn't read it, but in a good way because it made me feel so much.
After I read this, I listened to Smile, Smile, Smile, and all I could think about was the first chapter. Amazing job.
So SAD!
I can't read this without crying!
896049 Why did it have to be that her life ended so soon, The Cakes should've known not to put things like bleach on tall shelfs, better to store them somehwere else.
Another death that was too young!
Contains pony deaths, don't wanna read, because it makes me feel bad feels.
I'm guessing Pinkie dies from snorting too much sugar.
This one made a little more sense than the other two, The Cakes would never leave household cleaners on high shelfs or in the kitchen, and Applejack would never attempt to harvest the entire orchard on her own after the events of "Applebuck Season" All I want to know is why the warlord could be so cruel as to just let his people die, now if the reason he attacked Rarity was so he could obtain the cure that would make more sense.
No why did you have to let Dashie die without giving us a reason why the Wonderbolts rejected her?!
So wait was Pinkie Pie the first one to die or was that Fluttershy?!
896240 Exactly.
Wait so you kill Princess Celestia but not Princess Luna, why would you do that?!
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She is..she was..too careless for a royal fly squad. That's why.
@Author
I have to admit, that this is the first story with less then 2000 words per chapter that I'm really enjoying. You're not writing much, but what you're writing is awesome. It carries emotions very well.
896940 because luna is best princess
896322 That was the best add-on to any fic ever in the history of fic writing ಥ﹏ಥ
897259 Thanks, I guess. The story flow wouldn't support this though. I am glad that someone liked it
896291 Some of these I actually based on pictures.
896898 I don't understand why one WOULDN'T leave dangerous products on hard-to-reach places, and it wasn't in the kitchen; Pinkie simply brought it in there after taking it from Pound Cake. And as for Applejack, I believe a feeling of unaccomplishment/realizing she encountered a huge obstacle would be enough drive for her to try at least. And believe it or not, but warlords in Africa have been and still are doing things like this for quite some time. I set it up with the thought that Rarity's shop gave hope to the zebras and the warlord began slowly faltering from power.
896916 I did not give a clear reason, but I left tiny hints that Dash was rather brash, reckless and a bit of a rebel.
896924 I left very few indicators of the chronological orders of their deaths because I myself could not come to an agreement on who should pass first.
896940 Princess Luna is a lot younger than Celestia, and in my head canon a life freeze spell was put on her so she could learn from her mistakes.
I hadn't cried..until now.
Rainbow Dash is my least favorite, pony. Damn you.
897900 Well done. Fav and like for this
OH and another thing. I think i saw this on featured I don't know but page refreshed when i'm pretty sure I saw this story.
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CAN IT REALLY BE TRUE? DID I FINALLY MEET MY GOAL? (Foxi demands proof!)
898942 Lol I swear I saw it cause I clicked it and I got brought here
Before the picture loaded though
I don't blame you for not wanting to write this so much.
This was an amazing fic!
However, I think that Moonshine and Sunshine were very unnecessary. Moonshine didn't even have a similar flow to the rest of the story, and in my headcannon, neither princess can mate and, what ruined Sunshine for me, both are immortal.
This was otherwise a very good story. It was touching, and it contained some VERY good life lessons. Although I very much wish that you could have made it longer!
Keep writing!
So are the chapters Canon with eachother?
Luna talked about meeting Twilight and her friends(who are all dead but Twilight), And if Celestia dies now, how will she banish Nightmare Moon?
It's still very emotional and I love it! I was just wondering
>>superpinkbrony12 Agreed...
900089 I never really got the chronological order in my head right, but yes, they're all canon.
This one hit me the hardest for some reason (So far)
and Rarity isn't even my favorite!
~Rosalynn~
Ok fine YOU BROKE ME GOSH DAMMIT!!!!!
THIS MADE ME CRY EVEN I HAD A LACK OF EMOTION IN THE LAST ONES!!!
