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Celestia's Royal Consort

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DrownedChampion

DrownedChampion #1 · May 28th, 2017 · 1 · · A Chance MacGuffin ·

10/10 Absolutely Great

Starblade

Starblade #2 · May 29th, 2017 · 1 · · A Chance MacGuffin ·

I understand where you're coming from. It annoys me how I have to put an extra space/line break between paragraphs before copying it from Word or else the paragraphs will stick together. That, and that many of the formatting devices I use (italics, bold, etc.) vanish and have to be reapplied before publishing.

MyEvilPony

MyEvilPony #3 · May 29th, 2017 · 1 · · A Chance MacGuffin ·

Some minor spelling mistakes like maine instead of mane. Still looks good and i hope to see more from you soon.

Purple Pony

Purple Pony #4 · May 30th, 2017 · 1 · · A Chance MacGuffin ·

Just because spellcheck didn't say it was misspelled doesn't mean it's right. It only happened a couple of times, like main instead of mane and princes instead of princess, but you need to take a minute and reread it first.

Goldie

Goldie #5 · May 30th, 2017 · · · A Chance MacGuffin ·

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I recognize my mistakes with main and mane ladies and gents, spellcheck isn't exactly end all be all. However, I don't slow down to check it, and I usually don't catch it in reread because its such a common mistake of mine. I apologies if it bugs you, and I'll attempt to avoid that in the future and edit this one later.

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