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This has been a great story, the adult scenes and parts of high drama were excellent.
Would love to see a sequel to this.
Now I'm just waiting for some funnies caused by Volt getting knocked up on accident.
I like this story, it became much more later on and I really want to see it go on a bit longer. I feel that it could be continued with ideas like the both of them actually having to spend time away from each other with no fast way to get back together. Maybe they could travel around the country working with a show or band for a while, seeing other stuff as they go. And the last one which I feel should be left as something to end it on would be the idea of them having a family, and no I'm not suggesting that Voltage gets finally knocked up even if it could happen, but maybe they go for adoption, raising a kid together.
Hope to see more!
Pop is still OP. But when she got nerfed, Death Metal took the mantle with her head-on problem solving.
Or better said, SUV-in-gate problem solving
But hey, good to see some common sense! The two mechanics saw that they were outmatched so they just walked out, pretty much letting everyone know that the only reason they did what they did was for the money.
I was actually surprised how well Obscenely took everything in the end. It almost feels like he was expecting that to happen and mentally prepared to be at ease when it eventually happens.
Also, from the dialogue here, I got the feeling that he became so ruthless to show his daughter how not to do things. Quite a convoluted way... but not the worst thing someone could have done. After all, he did not kill anyone, even if he did some pretty stupid stuff.
So, that's one crisis defeated... and the story's not marked as finished. Is there an epilogue coming, or will there be more proper chapters?
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This is the end of Strictly Business, but there will be more chapters of Gemini Ties in the future.
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Oh and thanks for the comments and support, I really do appreciate it.
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My pleasure - good stuff needs to be supported!
Came for the clop, stayed for the story. Awesome job! Loving this fic. Fav and a like from me!
As Josh Scorcher pointed pout once, "If you did something against the law, an honest friend would tell you to turn yourself in. A loyal friend would be right there with you, saying, "Yeah, i know. But wasn't that AWESOME?!""