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This was a really great first chapter, setting up the mystery exquisitely. Also, I may totally suspect the weird investigator guy.

By the way, a stalker? Oh my. Imagine some creepy guy saving all your photographs and talking to and listening to you at every opportunity. I bet he even has dreams about you and stuff. Stalkers are really creepy. /s

Holy shit, the reveal of that "package"...
i.imgur.com/aiuNCVf.jpg?1

Can't wait to see where this goes.:raritystarry:

Third Roommate when?

This is soooooooo good. I've been trying to find a really good Rara fic, and I believe that search has ended.

“Well… aside from the police, at least Genda and the agency know that I’m still alive and kicking. An artist’s death almost always means a sudden boon in their music sales, so that’s working for them. My miraculous return from the dead will be kind of hard to explain to my fans once the police finally catch the stalker though…”

Did you mean boom

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I say they find a way to STALK THE STALKER ya know accualy when I say that out loud it's sounds like a terrible idea

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You're the kind of person that encourages "creeps" to go all the way with their crimes. You fuckers have nothing but contempt for them even if what they did were honest mistakes caused by cultural differences, social inexperience, and so on! Why WOULDN'T they get their money's worth, so to speak? If society says you're to be avoided, the logical thing to do is to give them a real reason to avoid you!
But hey. You just do your thing. I'm sure you'll be regretting your horrid ways sooner or later, it's just how life works. Just try to cool it on slurs like "creep," okay?

8315219 Wat. I was being sarcastic because I have a reputation for 'creepy' behaviour myself. I of all people am not going to judge people because of social awkwardness.

My god... I've never really been one for the long, dark/sad/creepy fics before, but this is amazing and (apart from a couple of errors) definitely one of the best written I have seen for some time. This is going in the Tracking list...
(Excellent subtle Applejack/Coloratura shipping. Je t'aime.)

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Oh, so you're a traitor to your fellow men, then. Good to know.

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t. also a traitor

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No, boon is a word and is used correctly here.

Rara better get use to a Winona Wake-Up Call.

Excellent start! I can't wait to see where this goes!

great story. keep up the good work

Gee, I wonder who the Killer could be |-(
Oh well, it's the journey, and looking forward to the next

Pretty sure I already have an idea about who the Stalker might be. Hopefully I'm wrong, because if I predicted it halfway through chapter 1, I'll never be able to enjoy fiction again. T.T

I am calling the stalker being Glade right now.

So very, VERY tempted to tag the people this is directed to, buuuuuut...

Stalking isn't just innocently, accidentally creepy behavior. Stalking comes out of a very basic, very straightforward desire to control the victim.

Guys stalk women. Guys stalk guys. Women stalk women, and men. It's not nearly as gender-focused as some sources make it out to be, though it's more likely to turn physically dangerous when it's a guy stalking a woman.

However, it's not an innocent behavior. Innocently awkward behavior takes correction. When someone says it's unwelcome, the awkward person accepts that, apologizes, and changes the behavior.

The creep doubles down, because they refuse to accept the legitimacy of a rejection.

That's the thing about a stalker. It's not someone who's collecting pictures, who's listening to you. It's someone taking control of your life. The pictures are proof you can't escape. The snippets of conversation are to make you doubt everyone around you.

To isolate you.

To say that there's no point in resisting, so you should just submit and beg forgiveness.

How romantic.

On the story, hope to see more soon! A good start, though I have my suspects.

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Boon.

Something that is helpful or beneficial. In this case, more money from music. Boom may work, though.

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You are very hateful to people with their own descriptions and ideas/opinions. I'm not sure what happened in your life, but there in no need for you to push your hate or sadness upon everyone else. Calm down, a little? Let's talk about it over a cup or two of tea. One lump or two?

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Jesus christ, this is why people who aren't calm deserve the gallows.

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I think I can smell a hypocrite... I'm sure Jesus would be proud with how you turned out, wouldn't he? If I had my opinion (which according to you, I don't), I would say that you were meant to be the cum stain on their face. Seems like idiocy runs in the family.

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Haha, look how worked up you are.

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I can tell that you, a hypocrite, loves to make fun of others. I decided to be the one to take your unspoken challenge.

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Oh, this is a challenge? Not you having a hissy-fit? Well that's pretty sad.

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I know, right? Having to project your hate towards someone with an opinion because you think that they should follow your way of life is sad.

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What is this weak-ass comeback, my little projector? Go take your meds.

I knew before reading this would be something, and i wasn't disappointed- i like this so far.

Well done on rara's feelings in this situation especially. the bit with the Poison gave me a good surprise.

then theres the little details, like AJ breaking out a black stetson for Rara's "funeral" i got a little chuckle outta that.

i hope that find that Stalker, but im really looking forward to see how long that method works- could always swing back. gloody guillotines as they are. but REALLY looking forward to AJ and Rara gettin' along at the Acres.

OMG! This is awesome! I hope you update soon!

Is this going to be continued?
'Cause it's TOTALLY AWESOME, and there aren't enough Rarajack fics out there...
Please continue this...:fluttercry:

I, too, am hoping this story shall be continued soon

*sigh* This is one of the few stories that I just keep coming back to to read, despite the fact its only one chapter, mainy because of the fantastic writing and style. I hope this gets continued at some point, because after all this time I am still very endeared and intrigued about what will happen next.

I...have no words 😶.

Please continue this:raritydespair:!!!

Geez I miss this. It’s been two years. I hope this is going to go on, it’s sooo goooood!!!

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According to the author, it is a commissioned story, and he is waiting for the commissioner to hire him again to continue the story.

Two years and no update from the commissioner :(?

Hope this story continues!. It was so good!. I really hope that this may be going the direction I think it’s going. RaraJack is severely lacking and underrated in this fandom.

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