In an Alternate Universe, the Empire won the Battle of Scarf and are now looking for a planet full with resources to resupply the imperial war machine.
Two years after the coronation of Princess Twilight Sparkle the Empire finds that such planet. A force consisting of twenty Imperial-class Star Distroyers and an Executer-class Super Star Distroyer named the Raveger will transport a variety of imperial weapons such as the feared AT-AT walkers. All of this commanded by the Empires best Grand Admiral Thrawn, Admiral Peitt, General Veers, and Director Krenic. Their goal was to take control of the planet with the lest damage to any of the resources on the planet, they did succeed peacefully. The Empire's rule over Equis is ruthless and the ponys have no rights whatsoever, can Twilight and her friends liberate the ponys of Equestria and the rest of the creatures on Equis from the Empire or will they fail and not only have to face the dire consequences, but also all the ponys of Equestria.
The start of the Equish conflict begins. War now ravages all the creatures of Equis, some try fighting on their own, and others make alliances but, all have a common goal to liberate their planet from the treachery of the Galactic Empire. Will the Empire be defeated or will the war end in stallmate an leave a once beautiful planet full of life sterile.
This story is going through major edits, so this version of the story is obsolete.
Thanks to Lord Demolition for agreeing to be my editor.
This is my first story and I am a slow writer so expect to wait for any major changes. On a side note this story was inspired by Sucide1234's story Equestrian Conquest and Tathen_Relag's story Realm of the Heavens.
Read their story's here https://www.fimfiction.net/story/359904/equestrian-conquest. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/324445/star-wars-fim-realms-of-the-heavens
Not a half bad start for a new writer and I hope you go far with this. But you have tons of typos and other issues that distract from your story. I highly recommend that before you publish anything you use the text to speech option available now on the FimFiction site.
It is a wonderful tool for catching many errors and typos that otherwise slip by.
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Thank you I will use your suggestion. I also need an editor so if you now anyone that can help me please tell me.
You need an editor, you should probably fix the errors on the description as well.
If you want, I can be your editor.
Also, I hope you make the Empire win.
I'm a fan of the Empire and I love the Imperial Navy.
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Yes please, I would love to have you as my editor, and yes the Empire will end up winning.
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Then PM me so we can go over details.
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Yea, Ok.
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This is starting out pretty well, can't wait for more chapters
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Thank you, the story is going through major edits so this version is obsolete.
The story is only going to be on hiatus temporarily to edit the first two Chapters.
Im honored that you were inspired by my story yours is looking great so far ill be sure to keep up to date on these chapters. Keep up the good work :D
I just realized that I made the Star much older than I first said it was, my bad.
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XD Too late for that. I like either side, Equish or empire. I have played the empire before in Empire at war.
PONIES! For the love of god, ponies!
Any updates yet?
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I am sorry to say that my interest in this story has faded away, it is no longer going to be updated in a long time.
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Really??
Aight, since this story was cancelled im gonna do my own impromptu ending.
(Everyone implying all species)
Everyone says yes, and then stop liking the empire after a short amount of time. Everyone rebels after empire has taken their resources, empire takes the loyal individuals off the planet then the empire does a "Base Delta Zero" unto the planet, the end
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Base_Delta_Zero/Legends is what Base Delta Zero means