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This story is a sequel to Rip


Starlight succeeds in killing the only pony who could be able to unite the six Ponies and thus permanently strip Twilight of her Cutie Mark... Shame she didn't read the fine print on time travel and realize the old Grandfather Paradox.

This is a sort of parallel story to both Rip and A Second Chance, earlier fanfics I did visiting this scenario, but instead of doing a Days of Future Past style "Time Burp" or just negating the thing altogether, I'm instead going for a Back to the Future style "Time Paradox".

Trigger Warnings: Foal death, People succumbing to the Time Paradox

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This is a sort of parallel story to Rip, an earlier fanfic I did,

Can I please get a link?

How nice of Twilight to want to rescue Starlight.

Liked it until the end, I dislike the Doctor fanon. Read too many stories where he cameo and usually the cameo's are done badly that the rest of the story is ruined.

...But if she never traveled back in time, that would mean she never stopped the M6, which in turn would mean they go on to ruin her day, which would have her travel back.

Have DOOM songs in my head.

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Thus the time paradox.

8183373 Yes... but if that all never happened, why is Twilight still there? She time-traveled too, right?

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Yes, but she wasn't the person who initiated the time travelling. Instead being more of a witness. Thus, she gains a sort of ripple-proof memory of the events.

But now I'm considering a darker ending where she starts to slowly forget Starlight.

But...time paradoxes can't happen. That's why they're 'paradoxes'.

Great story I always love a story where Twilight is better than Starlight. ALWAYS.

BECAUSE SHE IS!

Liked, followed, and I'm hitting all the buttons for this one.

This honestly feels more like the first chapter to a larger story rather than a complete one on its own.

I’m so confused.

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Starlight basically caused a grandfather paradox that resulted in her no longer existing and the timeline going forward without her being there.

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Wow, time travel is confusing.

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