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AndromedaNova


Note: I most likely will not make stories past season 2's era. I lost interest in the show, but I like making stories! Hope that clears things up! Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/AndromedaNova

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Twilight hasn't been coming out of the library for seemingly anything for what seems like months! A factor not helping is that the library itself is getting less time per day for anyone to even talk to her about it!

The worst part? While she has been spotted a few times, Spike has been nowhere to be seen. You'd think she would send him to do her errands, but surprisingly not.

How will her friends handle this information? What is Twilight hiding?

( A story in collaboration with B_25, up until Chapter 2)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 37 )

Woah, somebody liked the story before even reading it? That's a first.

I'm so confused :unsuresweetie:
And yet interested:derpytongue2:

8180026 I'm not going to lie:applejackunsure: the only reason I clicked in the story was I saw Dragon in the title:twilightblush: and I'm a huge Dragon/Spike fan:moustache:
But now I've gotten interest :twilightsmile:
And while I'll defiantly miss Show ,dont tell:pinkiesad2:
I hope this will be as interesting.

8180104 Hey! Don't worry!

Show, Don't Tell, the remake, is still being worked on! I just needed some thoughts for the story to be as good as possible.

A lot of stories made by me will feature Spike as the main character, so you have that to look forward to!

I'm trying to find collaborators for future stories of mine! I find the environment really interesting to have two different points of view flow into the story and have twice the creativity!

8180125 YES! :pinkiehappy:
Spike's my favorite character with Luna and Discord being tied for second :pinkiesmile:
But honestly I'm not that big of an MLP fan and usually it's Spike centered stories that I read and follow.:moustache:

8180167 I didn't really watch much after season 3, nor do I feel like going back to it. Just not as interested in it anymore.

But it's fun to make stories about the characters and what could happen in certain situations.

Maybe you'd like to talk some time on Skype or something?

8180173 uh, I don't have a Skype account:applejackunsure:
So.... Yeah :twilightblush:

What exactly is a secert? Is it some sort of beaver? They're good at building dams, so they could be damming.

8182199 Thanks for pointing that out, my bad.

8182209 Holy mackerel, someone who actually fixes typos? Guess I have a few chapters to read.

Comment posted by AndromedaNova deleted May 8th, 2019

That cover art is amazing! Do you know who drew it?

Getting all the more interesting :pinkiesmile:
And I'm assuming these dragons are Spike after Some how getting split into two being's:unsuresweetie:

8182209
The word is still misspelled (it's in your short description).

This story is very... mysterious? What's going on really isn't clear.

8182491 Fixed, thanks for telling me.

And that's up to personal opinion, can't really cater to everybody, unfortunately. I'm glad you gave it a try though! :)

8182579
I'm still gonna be here, reading it, because I must know, now.

8182419 No, unfortunately. :(

But it is only temporary, I'm going to ask an artist to design a picture of my liking.

I always prefer uniqueness over taking someone else's photo!

8180173 I'm in for discussion staff. Will send on Sky contact PM
//The Pink One being an narrator is always hilarious.

Well, there is definitely a guess by now. They clearly interact with Twilight, but not Spike. Perhaps Spike has been split in half, but neither half half has his memories, even if they have his knowledge and some of his features.

8188281 Glad you stuck by, hope you enjoy the next chapters even more!

It keeps getting more and more interesting:ajsmug: I'm excited for more:derpytongue2:

It's been awhile since I've seen a truly enthralling introduction, the closest I can compare it to is the infamous Mallajong of Spike fanfics, he may have been controversial but he had skill at crafting an interesting story.

Very mysterious indeed, the only issue I had was that... it was a bit of a mystery in-itself to place who was the 'I' (or Protagonist) in this story, needs more Pinkieisms! Otherwise, super great so far!

Okay, the ponies arw generally acting totally bizzare. What the fuck is this hostility for? Suspicion, hostility, imposing and intruding on what is pretty fucking obviously Spike.

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Correction, it's not as cut and dry as you may think it is.

Also, if you were being lied to for nearly two weeks about something huge, I guarantee you wouldn't be so non-suspicious. Besides, it's mostly Rainbow and Applejack calling the shots for what they will do, who have been fairly hostile and suspicious before, even in the show.

Real interesting so far, I'm a bit addicted to TVtropes, so the fact that these two halves are very similar to Red Oni and Blue Oni, one calculating and introverted and the other impulsive and extroverted, is very amusing for me.

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As much as I lead to present them right now, they aren't as opposite as they may seem. You'll see this as the climax approaches and especially at the end, not to spoil anything.

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Thanks man! Glad to see that you stayed despite the long hiatus!

But, you are correct. The story only gets more interesting from here! I'm not sure if I enjoy writing it and thinking about how I can develop each of the characters in the story, or if readers get more of a kick out of it!

one of those times twilight and the prinesses are unknowingly NOT doing the one thing that could fix it? use the gem again.

Well, this is a surprise, I thought this story had passed on. I'm glad it didn't.

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