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When Twilight Sparkle, a young Black Mage learn that an ancient Evil is preparing to return, she most go out and find a way to stop it, on her way she will meet friends, rival, allies and enemies while survirving countless of deadly monsters. Will she succeed in saving her world or fail trying.

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Comments ( 13 )

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8181254 Mainly some wounds, mentions of blood and corpses, I can remove it if it isn't needed

Noticed some cringe inducing misspellings in the summary, that usually heralds errors in the story itself. Probably would be a good idea to go through what you have up so far and look for errors, preferably with some help (and a writing aid, like Gramnarly).

8371756
I'll take that to consideration, thanks for telling me

Hmm. This is a pretty interesting read. I take it this will be a rendition of Final Fantasy 1? Eitehr way I'm interested in it.

8377766
More like I'm mixing different elements from various final fantasy games into one original story and it was highly inspired by a different fic I read

8378671
Cool. I'm doing the same with my MLP Final Fantasy crossover. I'm combining various aspects from different Final Fantasy's into an original story. Great minds think alike I guess.

8379688
Though sadly it seems ours haven't gotten much attention. I hope that changes for the both of us.

we're talked about it

we've

Also, you seem to have copied a sentence.

Good story so far, hope to see more of it.

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I can wholeheartedly say I have not copied anything in this story and I'm sorry if it seems like I did, any part that resemble anything else is a pure coincident, but I'm very glad you like it so far, I've been struggeling with a far too severe case of writers block for a while :ajsleepy: but I hope I'll be able to return to the story soon

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