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In the aftermath of Parental Glideance, Rainbow Dash has something to say to her parents about the way they've acted in the last few days. And this time, hopefully they'll listen.

A little potential epilogue to the most recently aired episode.

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While this wasn't a BAD epilogue, I'm not sure if I like it enough to fave yet.

8177829 Well, I did my best. Thank you for reading it. :scootangel:
And you say 'yet' like I'm going to add to it. I won't, this is strictly a one-shot. :moustache:

8177834 What I meant was that it might take rereading this story later on for me to fave it.

8177848 Oh, okay. I getcha. Sometimes my opinion can change on a story too, so that's fair enough. :pinkiesmile:

I do like how they're proud of their daughter and support her, but I think they're exaggerate in some points, which you showed very well in this story.

Meanwhile, the orange filly had something else on her mind. They've obviously never met Angel before, she concluded with a good deal of certainty.

This is exactly what I was thinking when they said that.

Good fic.

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Uh, I didn't see the episode. When was Fluttershy mentioned?

8177930 Uh, never that I can remember, that was just at the end of the fic.

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Yeah, but why was Angel Bunny brought up if it wasn't referring to Fluttershy?

8177955 Because Dash's parents were talking about bunny rabbits, and Angel is a rabbit. If you read the end of the fic, you'll understand the context. :scootangel:

Comment posted by RuinQueenofOblivion deleted May 20th, 2017

8177931 Just to clarify: I didn't delete the below post. That was done by my good friend Ruin Queen herself. :raritywink:

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Oh. :twilightsheepish: My mistake.

That was a perfect epilogue for the episode. I love how you kept both perspectives in mind when you did this. Well done, Snarky. :twilightsmile:

8177989 Snarky?! :twilightoops:
I LOVE it!! :raritystarry:
Hey everyone, this is my new official nickname. Remember it well. :rainbowdetermined2:

8177975 Yeah, sorry, that was my bad.

This is great! I enjoy your epilogues, especially the one that followed A Flurry of Emotions.:derpytongue2:

Aw, that was a good one. Nicely written. I kinda wanted to write my own epilogue/extended ending too, but it seems you covered it pretty well. :twilightsheepish:

Well that was very good (^^) I can't just wait for a new chapter (I hope there going to be having another)

Very much a case of "How it should've ended" for the episode. Seriously, something similar to this would've cleared up a LOT of problems the episode had. :rainbowkiss:

8178492 Thanks. I wanted to write something like this soon after watching the episode, and reading your review made me even more determined. If both sides had acknowledged some fault, it would have been a whole lot better in my opinion. Glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

While I liked this ep enough for it to probably be one of my S7 faves so far...you make some good points.

That, and the Scootalove at the end was just too precious. :heart:

8178580 My favourite of the season so far is 'A Royal Problem'. Have you seen it yet? :pinkiesmile:

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No. I'm sticking to the American schedule...but that one and Hard to Say Anything are making it really hard.

It's sad that I almost screamed when I saw Diamond Tiara as a background pony at the end. Please give her more attention...

8178624 It's great, but I won't spoil anything. I will say though, that I think I spotted Filthy Rich during a dream sequence during the episode, in very interesting circumstances. Watch it, and see if you agree... :raritywink:

Could have made the intermezzo in Lack of Faith.

Thank you! This needed to be done! I get what the episode was trying to go for but Dash's parents went WAYOVER BOARD with the cheering. I mean cheering your daughter for hanging a towel, Seriously?

This was done, perfectly!

Rainbow Dash’s Parents are nothing compared to mine as mine are divorced, my dad is in jail 3 times and a lawyer, my mom is a psychotherapist and have two siblings I had to take control of because they are going crazy. One Of Them Is An LGBTQ+ member and kept it a secret and lied to me for years and for everyone behind our backs. I have been in therapy for 2 years trying to pull myself back together after an incident became too much for me and as a result I have a therapist that helps me with my mental health issues I haven’t spoken about. Like The Moment Everything Went To Hell When I Saw A Teenager Like Me almost defeated and peed in the girl’s bathroom and I was lucky I was there because I told him it is the girl’s bathroom. I broke me as the last piece of my sanity is gone. My father is a criminal, my mother is busy and I don’t want her to worry about me, my siblings hate me and each other, I use electronics like what Alcoholics and Drug Addicts Do to their addictions. I haven’t been able to have the good rest of the summer or ever see the world the same ever again and as a result I have grow up more, being angry more which damaged my body physically and psychologically. It’s been very slow but I am recovering by the years and I still have good contacts with my friends and family. I talk to dad more, my relationship with mom is getting better, I’m opening up more and the siblings are fighting less. So I guess it works out but it doesn’t because what happened throughout the years will never go away as it PTSD me like What Rainbow Dash had become because of her unhealthy parents. I have suffered depression despite being 17 years and having ADHD and Autism. I just need to know that everything will be okay.

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I could see that they were plain crazy considering they even kept one her diapers. And scootaloo just because her parents are too busy to make time for her doesn't mean treating your kid like they can't mess up is a good thing. It just good that all the attention didn't go to rainbow head or or mare do well wouldn't have made an impression on that ego.

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