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After much work, a brilliant mage in a once magnificent but now corrupt city of magic believes he has found a way to save it in a new, powerful form of magic. To seek it out, he will have to cross the Veil and explore a strange new land inhabited by creatures the likes of which he has never seen before. Fortunately, they are quite friendly, and more than willing to share with him the most powerful magic they know of.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 22 )

I've always been a sucker for mage protagonists, I'll stick around to see where this goes :twilightsmile:

*Gives the story its first Fave and ThumbsUp*

Amicitia est magicae. :twilightsmile:

Tracking! :pinkiehappy:

A note to all writers: If you want to increase your word count, give Pinkie Pie dialogue. :pinkiehappy:

The one problem with reading something like this is getting to the end of it! I do hope that you will continue writing this, it has piqued my interest!

I look forward to more of it. :twilightsmile:

What ArcaneAngel said :pinkiehappy:

Glad for the update! Will look forward to your next one!

Glad for the update! Will look forward to your next one!

These chapters are so painfully short, still a great read though :twilightsmile:

Always exciting when there is an update for this! :rainbowkiss:

So, do you guys have any opinions so far? A favorite part? Opinions on characters? Am I getting the ponies right?

Poor CMC! :pinkiesad2:

Guess we will have to see what happens!

Well I didn't expect that! Yay for another update!

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Or random guardponies.

"Anyways, glad to see everything is proceeding smoothly. Miss Twilight, when you’re ready.. Oh hold on, Hey! HEY! You there! Get away from that! Those things are unbelievably dangerous, I don’t care how hungry you.. HEY! You dragon teat sucking, dung-wallowing, flank-on-both-ends, miserable excuse for a quadruped; back away from that thing, NOW!” Laurie stopped to catch his breath. “Now all of you, get back in line, and don’t go anywhere near those berry patches again! I will make you march single file all the way to Ponyville if you can’t keep your oat-stuffed noses out of trouble!”

I think Luna is mad for some reason :duck:

Really enjoyable and well written. Although I don't know much about medieval mage stories and what not but it's worth more reading.

Sincerely,
Darkys Black

well fuck .......

From the ashes straight to the fire.

How much should I review my Coptic? This seems to be awesome so far, hope it returns from hiatus!

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