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Thespia is a Pegasus pony who has been ridiculed by other Pegasi due to her inability to fly.

First Published
19th May 2017
Last Modified
21st May 2017
#1 · 1w, 2d ago · · · Flightless ·

Thespia a Pegasus pony has always been a ridicule by other winged ponies by her inability to fly.

* Thespia is a pegasus that has always been ridiculed by other pegasi due to her inability to fly.

If I can't get through the description without having to reread it twice to make sense of it, it doesn't bode well for the rest of the story.

#2 · 1w, 2d ago · · · Flightless ·

>>8175195 Thanks for the correction.

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