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"Applebloom!"
"Sweetie Belle? What's wrong?"
"It's Scootaloo, she... she..."
"What? What happened?"
"She's... she's gone!"
(AN: First chapter is one story, all chapters after it are a "sequel" which is better written than the original.)
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First EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!! I am first comment, like, view, and FAVORITE! But now I must ask, in the middle was Scootaloo cursing?
o sh** isn't something a filly should be repeating over and over. Was the creature supposed to be a demonic Pinkie Pie? My head is filled with so many hopes and questions. Anyways great story. Can't wait for chapter 2, if there is one.
You should add OC (original character) for the demonic Pinkie Pie, because I don't think that she was in the show.
Took over 24 hours to approve this...
Fimfiction, I am dissapoint!
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I dunno, it's only a mild swear, and it just seems like something she would do, in this situation.
Also, you may recall a somewhat unapreciative family (no, this is not part of my headcannon, i just needed it for the story), that may have something to do with it.
And yes, it is Pinkie.
What is this place? Is it a version of Sunny Town?
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Not even I know where this place is, and I created it!
(...Probably a few miles from the otherworld Silent Hill.)
Is there gonna be part 2? :o
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I wasn't origionally going to write more of this, but now, I think i will.
So yes, there will be more.
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can't wait.
889627 That's nothing compared to how long it took my story, Derpy's First Bath, to get approved. I counted 43 fucking hours! It took this site that long for it to be approved.
Nice chapter.
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It's not done yet.
:D Thanks for writing more!!!!!!!!!
There's a new chapter?
Zecora is dead?! 
WAT?!?! 
Two surprises in one chapter, can't wait for more! 
Oh Sweet Mother of Celestia!!! This story is scary, and I love it!!
Poor Apple Bloom though, 
run Sweetie Belle! You must live! Can't wait for more!!!
wat?
its still pretty cool though but really, really weird ...
Amazing... Maybe you can add Sweetie Belle turning to one of those things, too!!
Holy crap! Two crusaders down! wtf alert wtf alert!
Oh thank Celestia! I was beginning to think Sweetie Belle wouldn't make it, but the she got saved by some pony called 'The Lone One.'
(Glad to see not EVERY pony in this world is a blood-lusting monster) Can't wait for more! 
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I have a feeling 'The Lone One' is derpy. Who else would've put the muffin by the note??
1058917 Actually, the thought did cross my mind when I read that, but I didn't want to jump to conclusions.