Was wondering if you wanted an editor, saw several mistakes in all chapters and thought an editor might help keep the attention you've gained, still put on the story.
Stay as a servant wife, until an event occurs that solidifies her joining the herd; a.e. R & B start calling Brian "Daddy" after/during some harrowing action.
Yeah let em stay
Was wondering if you wanted an editor, saw several mistakes in all chapters and thought an editor might help keep the attention you've gained, still put on the story.
Full member I say
Stay as a full member.
I honestly would be fine with either one, because either way, it opens up options for new plot hooks later.
I vote for either : servant wife OR full member
Stay as full member.
8306093
8306125
8306525
I AGREE, FULL BENAFITS
I agree they deserve to be full members of the family.
I would say stay as a full member but I could see melody having the servent mindset as a way to make up for (in her mind) the gift.
Full member hooves down.
Make her a concubine.
Stay as a servant wife, until an event occurs that solidifies her joining the herd; a.e. R & B start calling Brian "Daddy" after/during some harrowing action.
Full member
Full member
Duh fullmember.
Stay as full members and REVENGE ON THE BITCH FROM HER FORMER HERD!!!
stay full member.
you should just let him give her and her foals friendship and friendship only.
8361367
Agreed