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Helljumper206
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Well this looks good, hope starlight can handle herself when she finds Locusts,(I just it's something easy like a bombless ticker)
Yay great chapter keep it up can't wait for more
Some wrong words in some places( i.e. Creators instead of craters.) but great work otherwise!
Hey custom stuff like a lancer with a stock! Hammer of dawn! That would be awesome!
8176131 Opps, thanks for catching that
didn't kilo squad fight threw there in gow judgment, its been so long seance i played that game i cant remember.
8176202 They did, I put down random bodies, like the Revers kilo kills on the bridge in this story
HOORAY
!!!!!!! IM EXCITED!!! Anyways this was great although I caught a few spelling errors.
So which gears of war will this be taking after
8182660 In the beginning it will be focus around 'Judgment' then it will go into GOW2 time line
So is bill with them in the armadillo?
Here's a question, who the hell left the APC there in the first place?
8200039 I went to a university one to time with my brother and saw a bunch of stuff leave a bunch of crap unattended. So why not a military academy with a couple of students leaving a APC in a work bay before the school being attack by Locust?
8200115 thanks for the reply, but that was rhetorical
. Really thanks
, that makes sense.
And I didn't think of that
Good chapter
Pretty cool but short. Can't wait for the next!
Wow, i noticed alot of grammar improvements compared to the previous story, theres still a couple oddly worded spots, but otherwise, nice story dood
I've played judgment. I also found some grammar errors
Great chapter I hop twilight read it well done keep up the good work
Are that nice
Love this story. I have only one problem with is you giving them a longshot rifle because won't that start a war with another country in Equestria.
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There will be more on that later in the story. Thank you for the fav
I like them all but for my vote, I'll go with seen 2
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me 2
Scene 2 with a twist Pm me for the twist.
2 but make it one of the doomed gears but I don't think you would kill of one of the 2 mc's this early
I like 2. Also, Rookie, not rooky
Seen 2. Our two lady's get stopped when a Bremak blocks their way out and have to find another way out of the town to save the doomed Gears. Which so happens to be a draw bridged that someone will need to stay behind to cover their escape.....
I’d go with number 2
Holy crap did not expect Claton Carmine to be in this story!that was surprising and glad to see he is still alive, though he never did die in gears 3
Morning should be Mourning
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Thanks for catching that.
A few minor errors in spelling but otherwise great
And I am guessing that this is the ONE Carmine that lives to the end?
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Clayton is the one that survives, yes.
Very wonderful chapter to bad they lost their helmets. I had the idea they were at the part where Jacinto was about to fall. Time for them to meet delta
Yes your alive and thank you for putting my character in the story i very much appreciate it and thank full.
YEAH MARCUS TO THE RESCUE hey wasent Ben carmine with delta during ilima?
If so then it looks to me like the two carmine brothers are going to have a family Reunion but I am begging you plz don't kill them off its bad enough they die in the games they shouldn't have to die in this too! That is beyond cruel!
Abby's helmet is hella good it auto repairs. Why you do this to abby?
IT IS A GOOD DAY
Dame don’t mess with abbey great work keep it up
We get Baird back? Noice
Saw a few errors but other than that great FUCKING job mate!
Please update soon alright?!
Glad to see you still working on this other authors don't bother.
Update
Update?
Update please 🙏!!!!!
Glad to see this story updating.
Lots of mistakes though but nothing that can't be fixed.
Please continue.
Great work
What happened to the JACK bot Abby found. I know it wasn't blown up was it?
I immediately thought of Sgt. Johnson when I read this