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Emerald Omen


I like writing, plain and simple. I've been doing it for at least ten years, and I love sharing my work with others. Mostly clopfics here, but some other stuff too.

Comments ( 33 )

Yay limestone x anon I'm very happy with this story I hope you write a sequel :twilightsmile:

Just from reading the description I can tell this story is going to badly need an editor to look it over. I hope that happens soon because I'd like to read this.

I read it for the promised inflation. Was not disappointed. So great to see a cumflation story that actually fills the mare to a decent size and lets her stay that size.

Did someone say CUM INFLATION!?!?!
....BUENO!

8159036 I made a few mistakes, but give it a shot. It's a good read. You could always point out mistakes and help me out. Like being my editor!

I don't generally care for first person AiE but jesus that cum belly loving at the end was top notch!

8160247 Glad you liked. Never really found a story with enough belly play, so I'll be the first. That is what happens when I let my favorite fetish loose.

Damn it you just had to ruin it at the end with Maud didn't you

8165315 Some say ruined, I say comical add-on.

8165692 the problem is it was a WAFF moment and she took it away

8168331 warm and fuzzy feeling. You made them seem actually credible as a pair but then you kill the mood with a joke

Pls make a sequel with maud

8182364 Will do. I'll add it to my list. It will probably be a while, but It will get done. I take it you liked the story?

Yeah I loved this story while burping isn't my kink personally I still liked it I also liked that there was a little bit of story with it as well

8184313 Unless I'm feeling lazy, I usually try to have a little story before the clop. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Limestone seemed kinda ooc. But thats fine... what im confused about is.... how did her inflated belly break the bed if all the semen that was within him
Before he ejaculated already didnt break the bed during their intense love session?

8188813 I don't know, let's just say that his semen was condensed when it was in him, and therefore weighed less. I never really thought about it.

8189194
I hate to be that guy, but mass can't be created or destroyed.

8417219
It's a clopfic. They don't have to make sense. It's just about clop. I'm writing an actual story right now, and I'm writing it properly.

8417572
Do you need someone to science the shit out of that one too?
(I haven't slept in 34 hours the universe is whispering it's secrets to me.)

Well, all I can say is to keep trying. The story is cliche, bland, telling, and unoriginal.

It was interesting at first, but then you added in the sexual attraction as subtly as a fraight train crashing through a concrete wall after being derailed into the sky.

Also, the "endearing qualities" of having Anon see her without her canon style (wet mane and less eyelashes) is off-putting and makes no sense. If Limestone is supposed to be a guarded heart, wouldn't it make more sense for her to hide as much of herself as she felt necessary?

Anyway, I guess my conclusion is that I'm disappointed with this story. It had potential (being inspired by Pencils' comic and all) but you didn't even hit the board with this dart.

Limestone is a Tsundere?
That's UBER Cute!

9255354
I figured the profile fits her well.

this is cute.
Your 'ye olde english' could be better, but it's not awful, like it is most of the time I see that type of english in stories.

10027793
Yeah, I honestly have no idea how to properly word things in that vintage style, I just tried to replicate how they spoke in the show!

Comment posted by Spazz Kid deleted Aug 18th, 2021

Dammit, I can't fap to this!

Anyway, in all honesty, this was a very boring story.
Now, I'm not saying I can do much better, but at least try bro, this was just...

Bad.

Then again, this is kinda old, so who knows?
Maybe you've gotten better.

2/10
Will not be clopping again :(

This story is up to a great start. Good job πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ‘πŸ½

Sad to say that the video that Lotus Moon did awhile ago no longer exists on YouTube and I honestly don’t know why. Still, after finally reading it I definitely enjoyed it from start till finish.

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