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We all have our bad days.
Some of us are lucky enough to have someone to help make it better.

Now with Dramatic reading from Lector! Thank you Ever so much!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-kW8EZe0n_8

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The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #1 · May 11th, 2017 · 4 · 1 ·

So adorable. While I admit Startrix is cute, I'm glad there are still people willing to write Twixie stories, and this has to be one of the best out there, short as it is, just because of the sheer emotion expressed. It doesn't need to be any longer than then it is just because of that.

deadpansnarker

deadpansnarker #2 · May 11th, 2017 · 3 · ·

I'm interested in finding out if you're liking the extra screentime Trixie is getting these days. I know you're not a big Starlight Glimmer fan, so a mixed blessing? Have you noticed an ever-so-slight change in her personality? Or perhaps you haven't seen the new eps yet? Anyway, nice story, and it's good to see you writing again.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #3 · May 11th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Damn, that was good.

Mocha Star

Mocha Star #4 · May 11th, 2017 · 2 · ·

That was the best Twixie story I've read yet!

Kitsunemagus

Kitsunemagus #5 · May 11th, 2017 · · ·

Beautiful. As much as I love both Twilight and Trixie, though I tend to agree with the stance of other authors and making them distant (or not-so-distant) relatives, seeing a nice heart-warming, feel good story that pairs them as friends or even lovers like this is uplifting, even if Trixie was having the great-grandpappy of all bad days.

Crescent Glaive

Crescent Glaive #6 · May 11th, 2017 · · ·

Olden Bronie

Olden Bronie #7 · May 11th, 2017 · 3 · ·

Such a warm and sweet story, Sis! I've always loved your Twixy stories and this is one of the best! Bravo!

TheTownCrier

TheTownCrier #8 · May 11th, 2017 · · ·

Bravo!

Level Dasher

Level Dasher #9 · May 11th, 2017 · 1 · ·

I was honestly expecting a Startrix ship until it became obvious, probably because I'm more amenable to that ship than Twixie, but I'm certainly not opposed to it. There were a couple of little errors here and there, but this was very well-written and emotional. Great job!

Shatter Star

Shatter Star #10 · May 11th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Loved it, been a while since I last read a good twixie story, wish I could find more.

Flint-Lock

Flint-Lock #11 · May 11th, 2017 · · ·

Short, sweet, and cute. Just what I want in a one-shot.

Luna Aeterna Solutae

Luna Aeterna Solutae #12 · May 12th, 2017 · 2 · ·

Obviously I adored it.

Phaoray

Phaoray #13 · May 12th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Short and sweet. Looks more like a bad week for Trixie, considering how far she must have traveled by hoof and not train. Nice to see a story of Twilight in her library again, and happy to see new stories from you.

Aurora Dimmet

Aurora Dimmet #14 · May 12th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Twixie remains the best use of Trixie to date.

Cross Lament

Cross Lament #15 · May 12th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Twixie is magic.

TasermonsPartner

TasermonsPartner #16 · May 12th, 2017 · 2 · ·

The "bad day, getting better" part oddly reminded me of an old Calvin and Hobbes comic strip where Calvin goes through a horrific day, only to be pounced on by his tiger companion when he gets home. Rather than making his day worse, it actually makes his day much better because it shows he is loved.

RarityEQM

RarityEQM #17 · May 12th, 2017 · · ·

8157663 glad you caught the reference I loved that comic, so I suppose this is a homage <3

Mooncalf

Mooncalf #18 · May 13th, 2017 · 1 · ·

That was sweet. Bt melodramatic, but it works. I especially liked Twilight's unconditional kindness. It's something authors sometimes forget about her.

And good to see you're writing. You've still got it.