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Frostling 02


A guy who has nothing better to do with his time, so he writes stories, and really basic bios which drag on. Simply put I'm a gamer guy in high school.

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The Clockwork are Alicorns created for one purpose. With no doubt in their creator's mind, they are going to be perfect. He can't really keep them in the open... Yet. The whole Alicorn thing was certainly iffy, but with their capabilities to morph like changelings along with their other strengths could easily be seen as a threatening forces should they have foul intentions.
Seven-Two, nickname Whistle, is an average Clockwork Alicorn with a unique whistle that none of the others can complete. He certainly has some design errors, but were those accidental? When he gets a role in being part of security for a group of interested visitors, he is assigned to some different objectives from the creator of the Clockwork Alicorns. That leads up to the big twisting adventure where he learns a lot is not quite what it seems. He must gather some important clues to discover the truth.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 7 )

Seems like an interesting idea so far. Curious to see where it goes :twilightsmile:

@Blank Page. I have planned pretty far ahead. I'm glad you're interested here, I hope I can keep that curious vibe for the majority of this story. Makes me wonder if I should add mystery to the genres as well with Whistle's goal. I'll wait to decide on that one. Thatnks for the comment! :twilightsmile:

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Seven-Two, nickname Whistle,

You mean seventy-two, right?

8209019 However you want to look at it. The way I'm writing it is as if they pronounce each letter or number individually. Seven-Two could be seen as 7-2 or 72.

Great story so far. I hope you're gonna continue it :D

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I do plan on continuing it, I just sort of fell off for a while. I am considering doing another story for a little bit after I figure out how to go about chapter 6. That may be what I need, another story to jump to and just jump between the two every few chapters. I certainly have a few ideas, but I may also just need to catch up on the show because I haven't seen season 7 yet.

Nice to see another update to this, do I sense a relationship starting between a clockwork and batpony?

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