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That One Pegasus
Aight, I've just come off a very long "hiatus". Might write again, might not. Who knows anymore? Certainly not I.
That One Pegasus
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hmm.... that happened
8156059 Yep.
That was hot cute and very entertaining I'm really hoping to see a sequel
8156165 I'll see what I can do.. ;)
8156183
YaY 
Nice.
My only complaint is that I wish you could have described Twilight's expansion, and how big she got afterwards, in a little more detail. Still, more stories like this would be very welcome.
8156932 Criticism is always appreciated!
This isn't bad but you need to really work on showing not telling. for instance:
Try:
See the difference? It's a challenge but with some practice you will get it.
8162066 Thank you, and yes, I do see the difference.
Im gonna assume twilight was in anthro form.Since she has hooves and breasts.
8190415 No, ponies have hooves. And like any other nursing mammal, they have mammary glands. In the instance of the pony, they are on the underside of the belly, situated next to the reproductive organs. Although humans call our breasts such, we call those of another animal teats.
So, no. This is not anthro.
8190489 Huh, didnt know that.
Then again I dont get out much.