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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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This story is a sequel to Care from the Heart


You've been a dedicated citizen of Our Town for years. In fact, you were there long before that was even the name, and you'd grown fond of a certain individual over those years.

She stole him from you, though, and it's going to take a bit of work to get him back.

[Written for a female POV]

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 24 )

Did I... did I seriously miss this? Jeez, how dumb of me.:facehoof: I'll read it later.

8169331
Eh, a lot of people missed it. You're fine. :twilightsmile:

Not gonna lie. I'm surprised it took me this long to read this. It's a nice start. Hope to see more.

I gotta say there aren't many second person fics with a female character, so it's nice to finally see one!

Either that or I'm looking hard enough, lol.

As a female myself this is turning out to be a breath of fresh air.

Jeez I can't believe this took me a month to finish... anyways,now that I did, I gotta say it's very unique. Very different from what I usually read. I'm impressed on how well you write a females 2nd POV. Had me in awe. Keep it up.

8291128 I'm mildly jelly about this. Just mildly:moustache:

8291373
I had the same reaction to Feeling Helpless. :raritywink:

8291592
Wait, I think I misinterpreted the meaning of your comment....

What did you mean?

8291633 I mean your story is excellent and makes me jealous how good you are against my stories

8291685
Ok, that's what I thought. I was stating how impressive Feeling Helpless is. :twilightsmile:

8291800
It's difficult to place my finger on it, but I just really love that one. I'm a little envious of some of your work. :twilightsmile:

8291857 I'm flattered but... still concerned why I barely get noticed

8291949
Your follower count is rising at about the same pace as mine, bro. That's not too shabby.

Besides, this is a site where getting popularity quickly depends on either writing a clopfic, or something silly like Appledash or some such nonsense. We're doing pretty good for two writers who value quality.

8292001 I'm not a fan of the former... the latter varies but romance isn't my strong suit(Seek Locked Away Feelings for I mucked that up...) although I don't mind writing shipping in a Teen rating. M rating stories are very easy to make but stuff like T(Especially E) are very more difficult. I want to become known for writing kid friendly content(with some T related work) not Clop or M rated story. That's my goal. Once that happens, I may consider doing one M rated story but until then, I want to earn it the right way.

8292054 Notice-I linked you to a romance same gender story. I forgot you told me you don't like those... Sorry about that. I can remove it(the link) if you want.

8296450
Oh, it's no problem. Though I suppose you can remove it if you want to.

Since this story is written from a female perspective, allow me a moment to get into the female mindset...

...I appear to have breasts now.

AWESOME!

You, for this is a second person fic you see, are a mare called Anon living in Our Town. You also happen to be in love with Double Diamond, but the thick dolt just doesn't seem to be able to take a hint.
I'm a sucker for a good romance, and this one was really good. The dialogue and narration were serious when they needed to be, but for the most part they both were quite funny and sweet. This one gets a high recommendation from me.


Read the rest of the reviews here.

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