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"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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8152843 The God of Gay Comedy is reading this... You have no idea how nervous I am right now.

I have to say, this was definitely one of the more unique approaches to this sort of kink. It's not common to see the one in the middle of the action end up being the solely dominant figure throughout, but it was handled extremely well. Even though the theme itself was a bit dark, it makes perfect sense in regards to it being Sombra. The story was well-handled, the sex was pretty damn hot, and the dominant presence of Sombra's actions are both unsettling and intriguing at the same time. All in all, this was certainly one of the best Sombra-based M/M fics I read in a while.

If you really want to impress people, and not just the ones you like, then it would have been a good idea to have it proofread and edited beforehand. Makes a way better impression as a whole.

8153714 Whoever said I was joking? I am sorry, but that's how I work. All the editing my stories have been done on were contributed by volunteers. I did try to proofread myself, except I'm my own terrible editor. So until someone comes up to me and offers their help, I'm sorry but this will be the best that this is going to get.

8153718 I meant that as a joke in the form of replying to your subtle question toward me. Granted a lot of editing is done for free, that's not really the point. I don't mean to sound rude, and while I enjoy helping out, editing a story with this kind of fetish material is just not my thing. Try asking around people you know, or make a forum post in the Shameless Self Promotion group. It's up to you to seek out volunteers.

This is an interesting story so far, I always like stories where the protagonists find themselves forced or pressured to do homosexual activities by someone how has power over them, it makes it so much more fun to read.
I wonder what will the other guards will think of those five how have horded themselves out to Sombra, and how their family and love ones and how it will affect them in their lives. I suppose that they sex life will be gone for most of them. I wonder if Sombra also has added extra features on those chastity belt they have like vibrating or maybe change they bodies and mind so that they become more feminine so that they would eventually become more complying to his will. I suppose this is going to become a downward spiral of dependence for them as they have lost any pretenses they aren’t collaborating with him fully.

I can’t wait to see what will happen next

Damn, this is good.

This is top, there are not enough storys with the dom getting dicked and even less in which sombra gets some nice horsecocks, love it!

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8154360 Y'all know, in hindsight, this story gives the term "power bottom" a whole new meaning doesn't it?

8156843 sure does, and I hope you will keep it that way for the rest of the story...

8157109 Eh... not to disappoint you, but this was meant to be a one shot.

8157115 Oh, sorry I thought their was going to be more, I didn't notice that it was marked as complete.

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You really should consider expanding this. Or making a follow up story with the guards really pent up. Chastity is a rare kink around these parts and I would love to see more of it, expecially in a setting as interesting as this one.

Absolutely loved this story! Sombra being the sub gives me life!

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Yeah, and am I the only one that notices that in every other fic that has Sombra in whatever gay clop that he’s pretty much the other way around?

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he's just got that dominant aura surrounding him, the thought of him dominating a subby shining armor makes my knees weak :twilightblush:

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