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Zong The Nefarious


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Honor has always held sway over my life, be it in the smallest amount or in the largest. But honor, like all things, has a price that must be paid. So, if you are curious my friends, to learn of the burden honor has given unto me throughout my days, then you need only listen to me for a short while.

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Meeester
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Honor to sad, to great mood, back to sad :pinkiesad2:
Very interesting one-shot. Sad fics always hit me right in the feel.

Or in this case:
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I really liked it. I think you did a great job without having to use dialogue.

Very interesting dude, I'm liking the story so far man. I like the action and the writing, but it's a real downer man, but a good one. Good, sad story.

...honor's overrated. :ajbemused:

Seriously, though, this is some deep, philosophical stuff. What is honor? Is it connected in any way to moral righteousness? When is it right to follow your superior's orders, and when is it right to defy them?

It's sad, indeed, but it gets you thinking. That's the kind of story I like to read.

891871

Thanks for the comment, it's good to have someone actually acknowledge you for stuff.

(Also, side comment of my own: Why are people favoriting a one-shot story, it confuses me greatly...)

891914 Cuz.... I really like it a lot? :twilightsheepish:

892057
I mean like tracking it, It confuses me a bit when one-shots get tracked... I'd rather have comments. So thanks for yours :D

Meeester
Moderator

892073
Well fine then, no favorite for you :twilightangry2:

892356
PAH! This is somehow all your fault... and the witch's... and Atlas'.

This was really good. My mind raced through all kind of possibilities as to why he was alone: wife cheating, them splitting up, she dying, etc. I guess she dying on her own was the least terrible thing. Terrible still, but... coulda been worse.

Cool fic. Very sad. Although I have to point, many times you talk about man and woman, shouldn't it be stallion and mare?

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Don't hate it, didn't especially love it. I don't really like one shots, but this was one of the better ones. Would definitely like it if you could continue this story, but you already have several stories going on so do whatever you want. Story was pretty good, with all that honor and all (always thought honor was bullcrap, but that's my opinion:twilightblush:) and the sad part made me think a bit, so good job on that.

So thumbs it up I shall!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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I need to find that... thanks for pointing that out :D

892389
Oh yeah, I coulda made this a big ol' twenty chapter story but then I was like: "No, better not, Gaius would be angry."

Love it. I was afraid it was about Shining Armor, but then i told myself I was retarded when the father died. I will recommend to friends, thank you for the nice story!

This story was well-written, and I am not disappointed I read it. The ending was satisfying in that it did not leave insufferable loose ends, and the body of the story made me feel like I was right there at the table when the narrator was telling the story.

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"oh woe is me, a tragedy had befallen me and it was entirely not my fault."

"I blame myself?"

huh? how can you blame honour for that? they aren't really connected to the darkside of his honour. it was just a cruel twist of fate. however it is well written (I would have hesitated with the whole "man" thing-good thing no one seemed to mind). so I'll not say its good or bad.

I'm already writing a review on this, but I have to say something here too.

This is really nice. It's really cool how you showed how honor is not always a good thing, how devotion to it can be corrupted. It's just...deep stuff here.

1005162
Thanks for the comment! Be sure to inform me when the review is done, I'd love to see it.

1005657 As far as I know, the reviews are all in. I don't know if they've been sent yet, though...you should get it soon. That's all I can say.

This is a really good story

Poor wife, I think she would wanted to see her just once more before she died, same goes for that honorable stallion. *wipes some tears off*

That...that was not the ending I was expecting. I really don't know what to say here... So many different feels.

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