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Just out of random curiosity (I'm not reading this yet because I'm not caught up on the main fic), are you doing anything similar with Automatron and Nuka-World?
8166580 Covering Nuka-World (Sparkle World) definitely, probably in the main story, like that dlc the best. Left hooks for Automatron in the main too, but it can go either way.
8166624 Ah, nice, personally I prefer Far Harbor over Nuka-World, but that's just me.
I actually plan to cover all three in my own fanfics, I look forward to reading your fics eventually and see how you approach them.
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Its not just you, i like it due to it bordering the supernatural (why do you tease me so Fallout 4)
But the feeling of an island wrapped in fog just feels so mysterious and that draws me in
(and teases my desire for the weird and the strange) 
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8167309 Oh I really liked Far Harbor, lot of missed opportunities though, was hoping for more of the creepy Lovecraftian vibe like the quests in FO3 concerning the 'black book', a lot of threads kind of fell flat when they had so much potential. Have to play through it fresh again before continuing, but why I started with it and used a fresh story for it, it deserves fully exploring and tinkering with on its own, in some areas I'd put it above Nuka World actually. A close call on personal preference between the two, so looking forward to playing with it here, just trying not to get too distracted from the main story.
Stubbornonium huh, i guess he has some apple in his blood (since they have a monopoly on the metal)
Do i even have to say it at this point ......
Growth 
I am going to keep it simple from now on .....
Her own little statuette.... how nice
, and with the echos of his mind it might actually work a bit like the statuetts we know of 
Nope, that´s ALL natural
Ok serious time
I really like Vira's (great nickname) growth and how you handled it, and i would personally really like to see more of this every now and then
And in case my previous comment did not make it obvious, i really liked how she finally understood that she is not inherently "better" then others just because she is an alicorn
Ps. love how you made her focus so much on what Ivy told her about having a big flank
First haw yeah, Virescent redemption fic !
Second : oh, she get he own Pip... if she get quest notifications, effectively she will have something to talk about with Fast ! XD
Would be fun if she ever come back in the Main Story, after this DLC story, that if she joins the Team Fast, Fast and her bicker because of conflicting quests... XD
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That would be an interesting conversation
That would very fun indeed
This is looking pretty good, I like it.
You mentioned a pink tinge to the fog in the previous chapter...makes one wonder.
Well when you go noir, you go all the way
Ahh the letter from Fast, yeah that hospital visit would give him an identity crisis
While you would have an advantage, there is still the matter of stringing the information together
He knows a guy (Fast), who knows a gal (Sassy)
Replace the "or" with "and", and that would be the beginning of a great joke
We have a future detective on our hooves (since she wants to find Fast enyway this wold be a good line of business for her, and she is telepathic ++++ all around)
(In case no ones noticed it yet, i love when these ladies experiance personal growth, it makes me feel like some of the Goddess's potential is being used like she could have used it
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please don´t end it here, please don´t end it here
A tall alicorn and a synthetic pony walk into a bar... (what happens next ?)
oh wait, that´s what´s going to happen in the next chapter isn´t it 
.....
oh... so this is where is the new chapter went... You got me worried for a second
I am very much enjoying this side story to Commonwealth.
lots of character growth for Vira. I also like Vira as a nick name. 
A Lannister Islander always pays their debts.
Any hope on seeing more of this?
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Working on another chapter atm actually. Have to play a little far harbor again, but shouldn't be too long.
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Great to hear that, I will be looking forward to seeing it, I will be looking forward see the three of them interacting again. The only issue I have was in chapter three where you seemed to be shifting the narration between all three characters at once in their internal monologue toward the end and it was rather getting really confusing when they are in the same in the same locations. I I know that Virescent is a telepath and that we are hearing their thoughts but it doesn't always sounds like we are hearing what bleed through her. By the way did you take a look at my DA gallery yet?
I had a feeling there were similarities to this fog and the infamous pink cloud.
I think the chapter was much more clear about the POV part being entirely focused on Vira's visions of things. I like that this Dima shows signs of being superstitious to with what seems to be preying on the Nick and Vera are but especially with manipulating this Sume in thinking that she might be a symth and to get her to go join the symth community there, even if this might actually be. I would have though that Vera wouldn't really get what Dima question meant as she previously didn't actually had a real sense of self being little more tool of the goddess I don't think she would have that much issue having her mind subverted if influenced like that because her life had been mostly like that, and it would have been funny to have a synth of all beings having to explain the issue about identity like that to her.
So far I like the mystery of the fog so far, wonder what the institute has to do with all of that?
Lordy, a side fic @ the same time as Commonwealth? You're one of the most prodigious writers I' ve ever seen on this site.
I'm kind of hoping this gets fused with the main story. Having references in there of his story, and perhaps a couple characters would be pretty cool. I always did feel bad about the Mariner. Wanted to use that stable cure on her, but though Curie knows how to make it, she wasn't programmed with the optional quest of hunting down ingredients and tools, so I can't get it to her without sacrificing the kid with a deathwish. This story though has the option.
This was an interesting chapter, it was nice seeing Spoiled Rich in the story and Ms Polo too, which I like the take on her business personalty. It was nice to see that Fast's favored comic book artist is still alive, of a sort. it was perfectly understandable that he lost interests in doing more of the Shrouded Stallion and moved on to other, I hope that Fast will understand that when he meats him finally, I wonder what happened in the castle that got him so spooked and how. I thoughts it was interesting that Vera has taken an interest in investigation and taking on a persona of investigator, can't wait to see when she will tell about Cane to Fast. Great chapter.
I loved this chapter. Just as I loved this part of thr Far Harbor DLC. I especially liked how you made use of Vira's tallents with out over powering them, after all just be cause you can read minds doesn't mean you have all the facts.
Im currently in Far Harbor in the DLC, almost finishing tho (probably).
interesting chapter keep it up.
I don't think this perk makes sense in alicorns...
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Yeah, still need to work on it I think. Wanted to use the Lead Belly perk considering where it ended, but have to tinker with it more for alicorns.
Nice chapter keep it up.
Okay. Three things.
First, drunk Vira is best Vira.
Second, that Glass of Water remix was absolutely brilliant, I had great difficulty stopping laughing xD
Third, ouch. That last sentence. Certainly stopped my laughing dead cold in its tracks...
This made me think of this⬇
Once again late on following another story but I hope to catch up soon
I am curious if Nick will be in this story, he was somewhat pivotal to the story unless you are planning some major/minor differences. Guess I'll half to read further to find out.
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Same boat here kind of wonder if some Zebra magic has been sitting around for a few centuries
I know this wasn't quite a Doctor reference but I think he'd be proud of Vira
If these things are in any way like the damn Anglers Vira is not going to have a fun time because those things were probably the hardest things to kill in the game (DLC and vanilla) aside form Fog Crawlers
DIMA!!!!!!!
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I know some people dislike him for the choices he makes/made but I always liked him and sympathize with him. After all he just wanted peace plus going his way let me kill that annoying high confessor.
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Freakin homicidal nut job
And here's the part where all of us started to question our own play-throughs(different wording of course)
I think this video sort of sums up the whole thing with Dima's theories, especially at the end
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same feelings always wanted to help Mariner and now speaking about her, I can't help but wonder about the Red Death and if it will be a real challenge or a joke like in the game course there's always Shipbreaker
Vira, your Val is showing
Was just curious but when does these stories take place again? (Commonwealth and this one)
Only ask because I remember reading the description and thought it said two years after the "Day of Sunshine and Rainbows" but part of the quote above makes it sound like it has been nearly a decade.
Sorry if you've been asked this before I'm just not if I am remember or reading things clearly.
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An interesting comic related to this
There's your path to Fast's heart Vira, though she may enjoy those comics herself. Can't believe I missed the fact of who Cane was until I got to this part
This needs to be put into art form. NEEDS to be!!
With the small hints I kinda saw this coming, but still...damn. Also good way to make it different from the game plus him having had a kid at some point. Yeesh!
Also a little bit of song for Jar Head and Vira to set the mood for next time
References!!
Reminds me of Dogmeat. Will he be making any appearance in these stories?
Glad to see some hope of these two possibly being friends
Looking forward to more
Love the new cover pic and outfit
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is there an archive of the cover pics from both of the Fallout Equestria: Commonwealth stories? It has been awhile.
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Gotta be honest I really have no idea
Maybe on derpibooru? But it may be limited
Nope, definitely not fat
Gavin just gotten to the last chapter of the main story, I am very glad to see there is more to read
I just remembered something. Wasn’t there a mention of another institute facility on an island somewhere in the main story? If so, could some of stable 111 be here?
I just remembered... in the DLC, there was a trapped Behemoth in one building, and I think it was the Vim! Factory. And there were super mutants on the island, especially that one that was different, the one who wore a bear fur hat/shoulders thing. How will that translate here in the story.
Crazyperson's Calamitous cameos, Batmare!
You are not allowed to kill Mr. Cane until Fast meets him. I forbid it.
I like this. It's a very different journey from the main Commonwealth story, smaller in scale. The differences between Fast and Vira keep it fresh, especially since Vira here ironically doesn't have a bunch of voice in her head. At least, not coming from her subconcious. While I can't imagine this side story will be super long, I'm very much fascinated. Closest comparisons I can think of is when Song of Ice and Fire added Jaime as a perspective, Especially with the redemption angle going on here, redemption being something MLP loves these days.