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In the days if yore, in a land far away farther than the mind can think, there lies Equestria. Yet she is different, different how then read on.
Please leave comments and feedbacks to my story yia is just the first 5 chapters

Chapters (5)

1.Prelude · 7th May 2017 · 108 words
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2.Beginnings · 7th May 2017 · 297 words
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3.Execution · 7th May 2017 · 404 words
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4.Dodge Junction · 7th May 2017 · 293 words
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5.General · 18th May 2017 · 383 words
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Luna Aeterna Solutae

Luna Aeterna Solutae #1 · May 18th, 2017 · 1 · · 5.General ·

"Ensued" is the wrong word here. I don't even know what you're trying to say there.

Scorch215 #2 · May 18th, 2017 · · · 5.General ·

Upon reading the description I would recommend an editor.

Mark Pecan29 #3 · May 26th, 2017 · · · 5.General ·

I was going to make a joke about Muffin Born based on the trailer, but there isn't a word in thu'um that translates to 'Muffin'

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