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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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Applebloom you snitch :rainbowlaugh:

The fuck did I just read?

I feel like writing a very ANGRY sequal to this.....

May I?

Ah who cares. I'M WRITING IT!!

as fucked up as that was what the fuck was that ending with Twilight

Okay now I hate twilight even more! So damn brutal I skipped it the pictures in my head scared me so bad....

8145329

Something pretty tame by this author's typical standards.

Now, I know this is a troll fic, but I still have to say it.

Fuck. No.

Comment posted by MidnightRun deleted May 7th, 2017

Amazing story as always! Got those downvotes but your followers love em! Don't let them discourage you!

can we not report this for being just plain sadistic. I think this person should go to counciling and not be writing this fucked up shit.

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8145512
You can report anything, but that doesn't make it a valid report. It just opens up the reporter to accusations of spamming reports if done too much.

With some of the messed up stuff I've read over the years both MLP and non-mlp related fics this really wasn't the worst by a long shot. I don't care personally for incest fics and I'm actually pro abortion myself but I think rather then making a happier ending it could of just been done a little less heartlessly. Like Applejack and Big mac realizing their mistake and willingly going to twilight or some doctor pony in secret to get it done. Then them maybe being slightly sad but at the same time realizing they did the right thing.

Dude, seriously. You need a psychiatrist.

that was intense, def not expecting that

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i think a majority of the people here are pro life

Nope.

8145310 I know right? I'd like to think she got stabbed for that later, but that wasn't part of the commission. :applecry:

8145329 A story about an incest baby being murdered. :twilightsmile:

8145337 You're free to do what you want! I'll link to it! :applejackconfused:

8145338 What? Why can't she hang out with her good friends AJ and Mac? She put the foal-murder behind her like a mature princess. :twilightsmile:

8145356 You'll hate her even more if you read my upcoming "Equestria's Finest Hour" story. :twilightoops:

8145358 Yep, the only thing that could have made it hotter was sex with the dead fetus. :rainbowdetermined2:

8145364 Extremely tame. Twilight didn't cream herself over getting to murder a foal, nor did she rape it or them. :rainbowwild:

8145390 This is not a troll fic. This is a commission for someone that wanted to masturbate to it. :rainbowkiss: A story being targeted at an audience that isn't you doesn't make it a troll fic :rainbowwild:

8145406 Only if I'm paid to do a good ending. You're welcome to make one though; I'll probably even link to it. :twilightsmile:
Interesting how you say pro-life though, as if pro-choice ponies would be okay with this or something :facehoof:

8145455 If I was going to get discouraged, I'd have done it already. Pretty sure I've written about a million words of this crap at this point. :twilightoops:

8145468 So you did! I linked it. :trollestia:

8145512 I think you should go to counseling for being masochistic. Why would you read something you hated so much?
Also this is TAME by my standards. Seriously, if this weren't comm:rainbowdetermined2:ssioned to be tamer than usual, Twilight would have raped them both and then necro-fucked the dead foal, and probably creamed all over their faces as she was cutting them up. :twilightoops:

8145555 Even if they're unwarranted, I am sorry that you keep getting complaints about my stories.

8145556 I don't think what happened in this story constitutes 'abortion' by any real life definition, but it's funny how people get offended about it anyway :twilightblush:

8145581 I'm not a dude :rainbowwild: My new job does give me 8 free therapist visits per year though! Per disorder! So I can get like 80! :rainbowdetermined2:

8145682 I wouldn't have expected it myself! :twilightoops:

8145693 Pro-life people tend to assume that a clear majority of people agree with them. :rainbowderp: It actually tends to zig-zag from year to year.

8145871 Well, it felt like a troll fic, but if someone commissioned it, then have at it.

That was unaccounted for...

I wondered if big Mac ever learns...

8145917 Well assuming he can still get it up, I'd imagine he'd still take a dip in AJ when given a chance to do it discreetly.

The most disturbing aspect of all this, is that this isn't the most disturbing thing that I've ever read.

8146213 This Twilight would be morally outraged by probably half a dozen of my other story-Twilights.

..... end me.....

8145871

Yep, the only thing that could have made it hotter was sex with the dead fetus.

Gah! Don't! You're triggering my PTSD from A Serbian Film!

8147281 Thanks for pointing me at that!

8147558 LOL. You're most welcome.

8147558

Twilight and friends rape and murder every foal in the school house?

thats horrible
I looked but I couldn't find the specific story which one is it?
and you should feel horrible
I'm a big fan btw

First question: what the fuck?
Second question: why the fuck?

8149269 You should not be reading things for which you can't answer both those questions! :rainbowwild:

I love your stories but this was just SICK. And the way you wrote this made everyone seem so nonchalant about everything, including those being tortured!

8151965 That's good, because that's exactly what was asked for :rainbowdetermined2:

oh my fucking god, Mac's letter :rainbowlaugh:

Okay, first off I didn't hate it. I don't usually like torture/porn stories, but this was actually pretty well written. Descriptive without being silly and not overly offensive *looking at you CUPCAKE*

My only complaint was what someone else mentioned; the whole nonchalance of it just threw me off. It was very OOC or AU to a large degree, but it was kind of an interesting change.

In the end, I didn't hate it, didn't love it, but I did find it an interesting and fun story.

8157050
That's because it was requested to be extremely nonchalant! That's kind of 'the joke'.
I think most people consider this more offensive than Cupcakes though because it contains abortion, and that's worse than genocide, murder-rape, and necrophilia combined to people that are too stupid to realize that this has nothing to do with abortion.

Hmm Just to understand...

Dear Princess Celestia,

Today I’ve learned that laws are there for a reason. More importantly, I’ve learned that not turning myself in only made things worse. I should have realized my mistake sooner and reported myself, so that my fetus wouldn’t have been developed enough to die screaming.

I am deeply sorry for forcing you to force Twilight to crush the abomination.

Your subject,

Applejack

What is the reason?... Because it all boils down to Don't do that else you will be punished in an ATROCIOUS way.
but any rationale behind the law is just missing...

8158167 so she HAS NOT learned that... there is NO reason for the law.
She has learned that she has to OBEY the law.
Is Applejack lying here?

8158281 Why are you questioning me as if I agree with the law :rainbowkiss:
Being tortured has a weird way of making someone believe whatever you want them to, regardless of if they're guilty or not.

I like castration stories and all but I prefer the more clinical approach to the process, more then the gory stuff and I like to see the aftermath effects of being emasculated. Still, it was an interesting read, good job on that hope to see more of that stuff

Ouch, just plain ouch. And Big Macs letter at the end? Pretty much what I expect anyone to write.

8315135
I did research on this one! I looked up how actual stallions are castrated, though I imagine real stallions are mercifully put under during the procedure.
It's weird in a way, because despite this being less extreme than many of my other stories, I had great difficulty typing out some of those details.

8315148
wow pretty sick but in a good dark way loved it.

I stopped reading at chapter 1, and I loved this story. I do enjoy your sensual bits, and you are a rather good clop writer (when it doesn't include gore during sex), but the other stuff you write (sex-gore, castration, casual/involuntary abortion, etc.), I don't care to read. As that's all contained in chapter 2 of this story, I will happily let the story end at them getting caught for me. Incest foal made, born, and happy ending for me. Even if that's not the reality of it.


I will give this a 5* for what I read of it (first chap) but will not fave or like it given the...other chapter exists.

8331523
If you like pure non-horrifying clop, you might check out my alternate account, which I made to keep certain stories untainted by the stuff here. It just has the one story so far but will probably have more.

8331733 Honestly, you could put that first chapter, and perhaps a small epilogue of Apple Bloom having things explained to her and the foal being born, on your other (non-horror) account and I think it'd make a great little story.

8333049
Probably! Though I have other projects I'm working on, so without being paid for it like I was with this one, it's not likely to happen soon.

You seem to be skilled at writing though, so if you want to make your own second chapter or other version of it, do feel free to. Re-posts that vary in rating are within fimfiction rules, so I think you can even re-post my first chapter with minor edits so long as you post your alternate second chapter at the same time. Then we can link to each other; you'd probably make other people with similar disappointments happy.

8334182 With your permission and the permission of the sequel's author, I rewrote this story without all the gore but with the same tension and theme, but focused more on the story than the gory. I also included aftermaths and such like those included in the sequel.


The 'clean' version can be found here: Link to clean version

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