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mrheadhopper


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The year is 2281... or it was. A strange mishap regarding a mini-nuke, some pulse grenades and plasma pistols rips a hole through two worlds and causes a man clad in a suit of T-51b power armor to end up in Equestria, Ponyville. Shit happens. Swearing and maybe a little gore, so no kiddos!
Fanfic in first person, woope doo.


Also, cliche as fuck.

Deal with it.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 50 )

:twilightangry2: you shall not PASS!!!!

interesting please keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

this...THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!!

THIS IS MY ABSOLUTE REQUIEM!

THIS IS MY CLEANSING BY FIRE!!!

:flutterrage:

ok glad u guys like this shit

it took a while to show up here lol

Eh ponysrung.png ill keep on reading this......What the hell am i saying ponys and fallout of course ill keep reading keep it up man:rainbowlaugh:

Yea continue I'd looooooove to see what shenanigans this lad wil get into on the equine planet

i'll prob chunk in more fallout things later on
next chapter tomorrow i guess

*Sees description*

YES!!! Finally! A crossover between Fallout 3 and Fallout: Eque-wait a second...

*Reads a few paragraphs*

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCKKKK!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

>"An" out of our universe, not "A" out of our universe. Just so you know.

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Man, you sure are arrogant.

I like that in people.

Oh fuck, he just gets knocked out like 'dat? Sadnuss

Twilight OP sparkle as always; and great discriptive narrative of what I do whenever I play fallout xD

"HOLD THE FUCK STILL OR I SHALL PAUSE THE GAME AND CAREFULLY SHOOT YOUR FACE!"

Now the positive stupgh is over, let's get to the requested critical part!

Pre read like a mother fucker. You see something out of place you edit he fuck and add to it until either it makes sense or you're sitting on a 100k chapter. Other than that, twilight seems a tad jumpy for someone who is fascinated by new things and has proven to be non hostile if she did not attack.

Other than that, I'd call this fucking awesome for a first.


Have a cookie!

58121 Wait has that been made yet?????:applejackunsure:
Sounds like it would be awesome:rainbowhuh:

Having just read the latest Fo:E chapter, this was extremely amusing. I WANT MOAR!

this gay site doesn't allow me to type cliché

sigh

bad story gay story autism levels are off the CHARTS yo

There are a few weird moments like the third dialog line but all in all, I like.
Tracked.

Woa shit I updated this thing

Woah.

Woah.

god fucking damn my pre-reader has to dc 20 mins before i finish it
fuck shit goddamn

other than feeling quite rushed it's not too bad

needs a little (a lot) of work and feels quite rushed. I wouldn't be surprised if you edit this at a later date. further more, did you plan at having twilight stabbed? I felt like that was when the story began to start sucking. You have potential, but again it needs work.
:facehoof:

I'd say rewrite this completely, I know a bad plot choice when I see one.

i knew how you guys would react to this lol, i made it extreme for some reason
next chapter should beup sometime in tomorrow afternoon

FUCK BEING NOBLEBRIGHT, SHOOTIN ALL THE PONIES IS HOW YOUR SUPPOSED TO ACT

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

A very specific point of "What" Is when he stabs Twilight in the trachea and then goes and talks to Rarity.

It didn't seem rushed I mean that's it's better then most fic's out there now

Not bad. Keep 'em coming.

Eh it was actually pritty good keep it up man

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His original intentions were to talk to somepony

Then Twilight fwooshed him around

So he stabbed her

And then went to talk to another horse

The end

Finally a story where the pones get some, i hope he isn't already out. Prove your strength! Knock down the withe bitch a little, yeah!!:flutterrage:

I like it! *throws coffee cup on ground*

I like it! *throws coffee cup on ground*

Woah. You managed to have a character nearly killing two of the mane cast, and not make him seem like a total dickhead (only partially dickhead). Keep it up.

not bad, it needs some work thou. its a little rushed, but you are already good at making me unable to wait for the next part to come out. keep up the good work.

not bad, but i am curious how this story is going to go.. keep up the storys bro....

ahhhh.....uhhhh....this is shit, I demand a rewrite, the character is a fucking ignorant retard....

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ahhhh.....uhhhh....this is comment is shit, I demand a rewrite, the poster is a fucking ignorant retard....

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OR IS THAT WHAT I WANT YOU THINK?

... the knife on neck part derailed it.

I believe you mis-spelled Remnants power armor, you spelled it as
T-51b power armor. And I believe you forgot your about your good weapons.

YES KILL EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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