As Equestria and the Changeling Kingdom prepares for the Crystal Heart Fair. Chrysalis and her remaining loyalists move to retake power and put an end to Equestria once and for all.
My first story so constructive criticism welcome and needed, I may have bit off more than I can chew.
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A good start my dude, keep,at it
Interesting start. Could just send proofreading, you tend to replace while with well.
At least many changelings didn't go insane and remained loyal to the one true queen. Of course Thorax blames everything on her alone, not even aware of what a mistake he's making. Oh, well.
This can only end well.
'like I wasn't use any method at all!' - using.
What's the other tag for?