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Humans and ponies lived in Hamony for ages. When one day the king of all humans gets over whelmed with power and attackes the ponies. When all hope is lost a hero will rise.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 15 )

Hmm, I will watch this, see where it goes. :D

interesting idea for a story but it's so f****** poorly done.

This reminds me of my asshole.

"Humans and ponies lived in Hamony."

Well, that was good for a laugh. If nothing else, you accomplished that much.

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But everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked.

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Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them.

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But when the world needed him most, he vanished.

Oh yeah, the story.

Hmm. It's kind of like something that Comicsnix would write if he could spell and didn't include gratuitous sex in everything. I kinda like it.

.............................................Welp celestia you are one screwed alicorn :eeyup:

I'm sure this is a trollfic.

That was a really godd story my friend and what did u think of my story so far? Still jearsy. :fluttercry:

Grammar Police requesting back-up and an air unit in this sector.

:applejackconfused: Rushed but a good ending. Still waiting for the backup and air unit though.

i cant fuckin read on, there is absolutely NO PLOT BUILD UP WHAT-SO-EVER!!!!!!!!!

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