Flash has been calm about things like magical ponies from another world, but now he has to deal with a mom and son dragon living with him along with some others he knows suddenly moves in as well. Hope the house doesn't get burn down though all this.
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Interesting premise. What you should definitely do is look into getting an editor for your story; there's an error in the story's description, for example, verbs are often in the wrong tense and some sentences are a little awkward. A proofreader might help catch some of that.
Aside from that, here's hoping you write more. Flash Sentry gets so little literary love in this fandom, every new piece is welcome!
Kobayashi-san Chi no Maid Dragon crossover?
8141428 KO I like the show and try to do a crossover hope others may like it. Even if it's just a few.
8141451 Cool. Cool cool cool!
8143312 KO thanks hope you enjoy it and tell all your friends about it. So what do expect to happen next?
Finally a Flash Sentry story I can get into, keep it up.
8143467 KO thanks and hope you tell all your friends about it and click the thumbs up button.
8143512 It could be a bit better written grammatically, but other than a few things, it seems alright. I'll keep waiting for more and to see where you take this!
You've stuck with me through my horrible updates, I'll stick with you friend.
8144600 KO thanks and you're welcome!
Sorry, but as much as I liked the source material, the story has too many typos early on.
8148770 KO don't worry I'll make sure they're better and hope you enjoy the story!!
8148811 Even the structure of the sentences was unappealing. And while I appreciate the idea of mimicking the source material, I considered it a bit of a turnoff that the dragon maid in question already has a kid just from the description.
8149058 KO well spoiler alert: The dragon is not going to be the maid in this story.
Wait, who is Lucoa? I don't remember that Mesoamerican deity.
8149996 KO she's the character from the anime Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid. She has another name though prefer to be called by the other one.
i think you missed the point of miss kobayashi by alot just looking at the fact you are focusing on a male is proof of that
8160530 KO yeah Flash is the main character of this story.
8160693 miss kobayashi is a yuri story as in lesbians see the big point your missing
8160761 KO well it's a fanfic story meaning we can do whatever we want to write. Don't worry, Lucoa won't be the only character in the story.
8160955 by putting in a male lead its just a generic harem story
8161505 KO well gets gonna be a small harem, as you can see with cover and maybe give Flash some 'awkward' moments if you know what I mean, for the comedy like the tag.
8161523 so generic harem story like all the others
8161744 KO yep
I'd say he's more of a beige, maybe Almond?
8181008 KO yeah I thought he was like light-yellow when I went to that wiki website about him. Hope you enjoy the story and check the poll on the blog I set up please.
Love the story
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KO thanks and hope you tell all your friends about it and enjoy!
I am loving this story so far and can't wait to see where this goes.
Decided to give this a read since this is the last story for me to catch up on(for now).
Interested in seeing how things go with dragons and such.
In fact I wonder if there might be something for Spike since he(or at least his Equestrian counterpart/self) is a dragon.