“It is better to be young in your failures than old in your successes.”
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Life won't be as long as Fluttershy wants it to be. With each of her friends breaking down around her, she doesn't know if she'll be able to stay in Ponyville much longer unless she is to break down with them. Confronting them won't be easy. But her greatest confrontation could be with someone she views in a more special way.
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It seems like the story ends too abruptly like there should be more.
But then,
Life also ends too abruptly, too often, and there should always be the option for more.
Jesus h christ my heart done gone and shattered...
... it's too early to have my heart ripped apart...
whY WOULD YOU d0 ThIs.
Amazing. Sad, but amazing
Thumbs up.
But omfg
WAAAAAAA
Damnit man, why'd you have to make me feel this way this early in the day?
This was interesting. I feel like maybe it was aimed to be more about discord and flutters than everyone, and would have liked to possibly see more from everyone else about what was happening, but I've all it is a good fic.
I liked it, I just find it odd/off that Discord didn't offer to stop it somehow. Chaos magic can be unpredictable, and she might have to live her life out as something she's not expecting, but for him to just accept it feels wrong to me. He would never just accept it.
Love the angst omggg
No disgust. Just pain and suffering from the FEELS.
I agree with the comments that it ended a bit abruptly though. The last part felt rushed.
missing whitespace
this ought to be a period, not a comma. you aren’t explicitly stating who’s talking, because “returned” doesn’t work as a substitute for “said”.
“a gentle thanks” I think.
Okay, I reviewed it here. Unfortunately, it came out very negative this time, mostly based around Fluttershy’s blind acceptance to her fate which found unjustified.
Haven't read the fic yet, but I suggest ignoring the review that silverspawn posted. Guy bases his reviews off personal opinion and writes them like a dick, not just bluntly. Your like to dislike ratio is amazing; I bet this story is great.