A guy who writes about fat horse, among other things. If that's not your thing, no one's stopping you from looking someplace else.
Shining Armour has put on a few pounds during his paternity leave, and he needs to go on a strict diet so he doesn't go back to Canterlot a blob!
How will his wife support him with that...?
A short one this time, but it was done as an entry for a writing contest on a Discord server I'm part of!
Somehow I won, I have no idea how
Sorry for being so short this time, but I hope you enjoy anyway!
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You should allow voting, I wanna upvote this story I totally haven't read because I totally didn't enter the contest as well!
8140450 Upvoting is on, I thought
And of course you didn't enter, why would you ever even think of it?
Nice switcheroo there. These two make a cute couple.
Well, this is an investing read.
Well this was a good read, I still hope to see more of your work again.
Love to see a sequel to this flurry Heart boucning on her momma's tummy and then huggng it before she falling asleep.
Sure any pony see this would be going."DDAAAAAAAAWWWWW!!"
Good thing he wasn't at Restaurant Row, then.
8140466 Glad you liked that! I agree, I love their relationship
8140485 I'll take that as a compliment
8140489 Thanks! I'll get more out when I can~
8140662 Omg, I need to keep that in mind
8140743 Indeed! Unless he's called to Manehattan...
8141346 Yes, it is a compliment. This is really good.
Enjoyable read
However, remember to start paragraph wheneversomeone new starts speaking. That way you'll avoid those blocks of text and dialogue where one can get lost easily.
Good stuff mate.
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8141655 I'm very certain I did that
Where did you spot this?
8142113 Thanks kindly
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8142229 No, you haven't, at least not in the sense of having the paragraphs separated. What I have in mind is this:
It should be, according to FIMFic rules, formated like this (it's could vary a little at some points though):
8142241 Ah, I see your point
I figured keeping it grouped together would mean less confusion
Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind
8142567 You're welcome!
It may have been short, but it was still good. :3
And I'm with Diablo, I think this could use a sequel. :)
8147359 Thanks! I may do a sequel in the future~
Read this while listening to Weird Al's "Grapefruit Diet" and a few other food songs by him.
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Sounds like a good soundtrack
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The other songs were Taco Grande, The White Stuff which is about Oreo cookies, Addicted to Spuds is about potatoes and anything made out of them.